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While it does well to put a new look on the brothel and a new way to show off poses like Madam's, the whole deal about not knowing what you're aiming to click and not knowing what you'll get for clicking is a pretty negative direction. The style is nice, just please consider supplementing it with clearer navigation.

Affection increases if you play the scene right to agree to be the Dullahan's girlfriend and approach cordially (not stealthily) and sexually.

The Labyrinth and Jester keep their locations and names clearly no matter how many times you encounter them, but the Dark Knight's space deceptively shows nothing available after you beat her. Is this intentional?

It comes from some Artifact chests, like the Hunger charm.

Getting the Gladius from the infested ruins does wonders for beating her. And since you have the grace period of her not attacking, losing your balance isn't a huge deal.
Spring Attack > Tempo Attack until falling > Hop up > Spring Attack > Tempo Attack is pretty reliable with the Gladius and 6-ish STR / DEX / END, especially if the skills are trained higher.

- Why does the Ranger start off weaker in stats than all other classes? The total of its base stats is 20, while every other class gets 22.
Given Ranger's stereotypes in fantasy as being capable solo survivors of nature, +1 apiece to Strength and Endurance seems accurate if this is to be changed.

- I haven't donated, so I don't know how far in the works continuity is among enemy NPCs and foes. But is it possible that the recurring ones get a quest line or advancing dialogue that expands on them and fleshes them out?
The first example that comes to mind for me is the Ghost Bride. She seems to treat Hiro as her lover prior to death; I'd imagine something that opens her eyes to her current status and opens her up to become at peace with what she is. (And conveniently NOT crossing over because her unfinished business changes from mistaking Hiro for her old lover to haunting Hiro as her new lover.)

- Why does Seduce start from the Defensive position? Flavor wise, it strikes me as odd to have to take a protective stance before waggling one's butt at someone. And that it could viably lead into directly taking stances that involve sex, skipping Kneel or Present and going straight to Wrestle, Grab it, Say Aah, and the like to initiate.

- The game's pretty awesome. c:

- I played in an odd order and found I could get through the entirety of the Mouth Fiend quest, return safely, get back to the Brothel, and still not have initiated the "Talk to Brothel mistress privately" bit. I'm sure it's on the plate, but it just kinda made me head-scratch that I could get Hiro blacklisted, dodge the bad end punishment, and be talked to cordially behind closed doors.

- I'm sure it's on the plate somewhere, possibly Patreon, but will there be a way to sell the 10,000 Hunger Charms and Mana Crystals built over time?

- On the note of Hunger Charms, wearing one causes all of them to be selected at once. Not a big deal in the current version, but it might cause a problem when buying/selling comes up.

- I'm not sure what the joke about Ice cream levels and the Golem eating ice cream stems from, but since we do sometimes find ice cream in chests, is there some way to gift it to the Golem I'm not seeing?

- Hotdogging. If there's a way to get a butt-styled domination on a foe and not get penetrated, that's probably it.

- All things will be more cohesive and coherent in time, but for what it's worth about flavor, giving a Centaur a handjob results in being told Hiro's insides are filled to the brim. One of the only of endings mismatched to battle results I've seen so far.

- Could players be allowed to service the Innkeepeer for a night, and lie to Puca about being unable to pay the debt, regardless of funds on hand? And I might be missing it due to not browsing the Inventory/Character sheet too often, but are funds listed anywhere when not shopping?

- Really, the game's great, even in such an early stage. Keep it up. <3