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Oh thank you! Glad you enjoyed.

I really enjoyed the setting. At the beginning I thought the metaphor was a bit obvious, but as the VN progressed, I was able to put it aside to enjoy the story and characters.  On a technical aspect, I missed some kind of rollback/history feature, and UI could be improved for readability. However, I really liked how CW where handled, as it can be tricky. Also the text effects were great. Generally, it was a cool read and I think it has potential!

It was super creepy and uncanny, loved it. However, while I know it's a demo, it's a really short demo. I would have wished for it to be just a little bit longer. Maybe another encounter or a bit more time spent exploring that 'world'. The blue-thing is impressive nightmare-fuel nonetheless.