I really enjoyed the setting. At the beginning I thought the metaphor was a bit obvious, but as the VN progressed, I was able to put it aside to enjoy the story and characters. On a technical aspect, I missed some kind of rollback/history feature, and UI could be improved for readability. However, I really liked how CW where handled, as it can be tricky. Also the text effects were great. Generally, it was a cool read and I think it has potential!