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Did you draw everything in this project ? They are actually good. The thumbnail really catch my attention (my first anime is a yuri anime name "Yami to Bōshi to Hon no Tabibito" with the same cover style)

Normally i don't suggest much about any game, because every author has some talent themselves (of course including you). But i see your real effort in making this project (and yuri is my favorite), so I did a quick run and have a few suggestions.

1. The story telling style:

- Please don't use too much narrative paragraph on the whole screen, they make readers hard to focus on the scenes and low down the mood/vibe.

- Maybe you should you some black screens and some "pause" between scenes to make the story alive.

- Don't use too long sentences, and you don't need to tell everything. Just like making films or MV, readers have their own imaginations, they can pick a line, a scene, a picture/image and can feel the story in with their own view. (And some mysteries always add more feeling and curiosity)

2. The music/ambient/effect:

- This can be really hard because music is another thing, i saw a lot of authors with good story but not so good at adding music to their story, which lead to ruin the whole project. Maybe you should find someone who good at this field to collab. Trust me, with the right background music/ambient/effect, the project will be risen to another level.

- You can try to making music yourself, there're a lot of ai music generator (personally i recommend suno)

3. Scenes transition & camera:

- While your drawing really good, but the scenes transition need to be improved. You can learn them by do some research in movie making field and photo shooting experience (or some popular AVN on this site). The transitions and camera angle should be align with the scene vibe/mood, which mean they can be really fast or slowly or instant black out or changing non-stop, depend on the scenes.

4. The potential:

- This project really has huge potential and catching story. With your talent in drawing and the effort in making this, i know you can make a stunning VN.

God speed.

Female protagonist, i'm in.

OMG this shit is fuking high quality. You got real talent, dude. The animation, the vibe, the background, the character are awesome.

Thank you, i understand the pattern of the code and have a list of code. Didn't check the scrap and that's why i input the wrong one

Thank you, i didn't check the scrap and that's why i don't see the +10100101 thing.

Imma write down that artist name, thank you. The world map really inspire me (especially the dragon)

I mean when input the wrong code, Harper humming E F G then A B C D etc...and Cal gave a hint A to B is 1, A to C is 2 and A to A is 0. But, maybe i overcomplicating it, will try again.

That would be not so logic. Why the "embarrassed" more important than his/her friend life ? And why the "get along with the story" help him/her to find his/her friend ? Normally people will explain the current situation and find the "friend" first, then solve the story later. Else, it make the whole conversation at the beginning between MC and Harper seem non-existent.

Btw i'm stuck at the second laser gate and don't want to use the walkthrough/manual. Working on it, you guys know how to wreck other's mind, lol

The alphabet and number hint seem useless, for example:

Dominion (37) - roll test many rounds:

- Steps from A: 3-14-12-8-13-8-14-13 (or 35384854) => wrong both case

- Steps between letters are: 11-2-4-5-5-6-1 (or 2245561 not enough 8 letters/numbers and the 11-2-4-5-5-6-1 are 9) => wrong both case

The MC completely forget Harper when he/she meet Penny, lol

I don't understand, why the MC didn't tell his name when he meet Penny ? And why he didn't find Harper first, since she alone in the castle (Didn't he care about her and don't want her follow him at the beginning) ? Why he didn't tell Penny the current situation and tell Penny about Harper ? With everything happen in the forest, he should know that something wrong and the top priority is wake his friends first. Why he didn't say anything, everything is in his mind and he just let Penny realize by herself ? Why ? Does Penny has ability to read other's mind ?

Yeah, i use holy light in fights with 5+ enemies and items in boss fight (beat the thigh queen in less than 1 minute). There are some way to earn money (eggs & milk) but it pain in the ass and i'm afraid the chicken may die (since the game so random).

Btw, you did very good with the art, i played a lot of this style of game but yours is stunning than some big companies. Did you buy the RPGM packs or you draw them yourself (the buildings, the maps, etc..) ?

This game is amazing but the fights are super hard, idk if i did something wrong but my party got wasted easily. Healing items & equipment are useless, should consider re-balance.

Finish the game today, amazing game with good story, Kat is my favorite character and Mida so badASS. Hope the battle smoother but it was ok (shield warrior through part 1 and whatever with stun/scare effect + "Steve" for part 2)

Waiting for your next project.

Damn i knew this game for a very long time but still not have enough courage to try it, i don't want to lose my gender

This one should be called a movie, the hype, the atmosphere, the action, the effect and animation with slow motion are absolute amazing.

Btw, parts of the story have the same idea with mine (private novel and unpublished), like the house under the tree in the Zone, the loop at the apartment. Man you have no idea you made me speechless when i see an athor with the same idea. It just amazing.

And the fighting scene of Shina with the scout's gang, slow motion effect and animation was...i thought im watching a god damn action movie (still remember when Shina slowly step back and blend to the darkness). You should be an actual movie director.

The story so good made me forget that im playing an adult game, and the ego, my ego completely gone, i just want to understand those girls, help them with their situations and have fun playing volleyball.

Is this some sort of enlightment, lol

Very good and funny game with one of the best battle system (maybe the best, i played almost adult games on this site and yours still out rank others), i see you guys put a lot of effort in that, and the skills system so cool with complex effects and masteries.

But is it only me or someone has perfomance issue, my phone seem laggy and everything seem slow when combat and minigame (especially the 1in3 game at the fast food restaurant, tried my best and only got 3.2k points because of the lagging and slow waiting the icons drop down after done some combos).

This one goes to my collection and waiting for the next update (and the librarian girl). Thank you dev for making this and sorry for bad English.

P.s: i wanna shot that Klaus in the head many times or order the female necromancer kill him then kill her and revive her after, still wonder why everyone can stand him and not doing anything.

lol, stop complain please. How old are you ? What's wrong with LGBT ? I'm straight and in my opinion they're just the same as us.

Only weak men hold grudge about other's gender. Did they say anything bad about you, or about straight gender ?

And, how can you have a lot of women in your harem but other's cannot have a little bit for themselves ? Or deep inside, you don't have enough confidence in yourself ?

Well, i don't mean offend, but let your mind wide open, the world is colorful with various kind of things. Experienced them with open mind to make our short life more interesting.

It's me on the discord, changed to window and everything is fine

The PC version made my laptop frozen (once while "hold to overwrite save" and once while on the cart)

Fishing is a joke, the fish is super fast and the pressing has delay (pc version). No way to fish high grade fishes.

Problem solved.

These steps:

1. Open game, choose Yes. You have to start the game before the 2nd Yes (if not, Mary keep asking about Santa)

2. Save after change MC name

3. Close game and make Mary hide inside the church

4. Open game and sell something to get money for pick lock

5. Wait until Zanika go to toilet, peek her and get caught

6. Talk to Mary until the "leave me alone" appear (god i'm scare of this step)

7. Talk to bug fix girl until she close the church ( the fixed :) )

8. Active teleporter until meet Mary ghost, keep talking until end and save game

9. Open game, choose delete file and press delete persistent file (don't try to find the persistent file in your phone to save time)

10. Load game and go to church then talk to Mary.

Done.

I read all the comment before starting any game.

I already actived 2 teleport and keep running around.

I have just removed the game and redownload to try again.

The 1st time i talk to her and the loop begin

There's no ghost

Mary keep saying "leave me alone", the bug fix girl dissapeared. There's no clue !

I tried to deleted the persistent file/folder or everything else related to the game (i keep track all the files in my phone by their created date/time), downloaded and run a few times but cannot find anything.

My steps:

1. Make Mary hide inside the church

2. Talk to her

3. She keep saying "leave me alone"

4. Talk to bug fix girl

5. Bug fix girl dissapeared

6. Talk to Mary and she keep saying "leave me alone"

7. Deleted every file has name "persistent" in my phone

8. Mary dissapeared too

9. Open game, choose deleted file, press in delete persistent file

10. Open game again and repeat until Mary hide inside the church.

11. Talk to Mary and repeated the "leave me alone".

12. Keep talking to her for 10 minutes but nothing happen.

Wow, this game is really good, thank you Cosy. I like how things developed.

Highly recommended to play this game.

Edited: added to my collection (this made 3 games in my collection since i'm very picky xD)

It's cool having a friend to share this kind of hobby.

Keep up the great work guys, this one is on my top 3 must play AVN (i already played a lot of them,  haha)

Will be patient waiting for the next update :)

Btw, did you do everything by yourself ?

It's a good game, i replayed 2 times and going for the 3rd with the new update. Wonder if, by any chance to spend "more time" with Kazuki-chan

BEST.GAME.EVER

Created an account to say this game is really good. I played alot of aldult games on this website, but this one is unique. Every girls worth your time.

Godspeed dev.