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OMG i don't know where to start... This game is quite bad. 

The story is dumb, this is not a real point bc we honestly don't care for the jam (as for spelling and gammar...) but I need to say it.

The visuals are awful, I gess it was fun for you to draw them in MS paint and I will give you a pass for this. (why the McDonald's logo tho?)

The real problem for me comes from the game itself : this is boring! As you can only shoot and reload, the game is a no brainer : just fire all your bullets and hope for the best. In the current state, you can simplify the gameplay to "spam SPACE and R" and this is too bad.

You should have spent more time on designing mecanics : make the moving part useful (dodge bullets, gather ammos etc...) and add some other things to do.

Last and final nail in the coffin : I don't think it sticks to the theme. If your interpretation of "only one" is a fighting game bc you need to be the last one standing, then games like Street Fighter are good too, even if you can choose between ~40 caracters... And what about Battle royale games...

I hope i wasn't too harsh, I tried not to. Still good job !

Design 2/5 : problem is, the visuals don't help. I've mistaken the bombs for bumpers after I discovered that the bulet could bounce at the walls and I tried to headshot the monster bc he was ugly as hell ^^  

Theme 5/5 : nice fit with the theme. 
Originality  4/5 : it looks a bit like mini golf to me but the addition of canons breaks this feeling so this is fine. 

IMO, you started with the "feed the monster" idea and built the game around this. This is not a bad idea but you should have tried to simplify this into "get the ball from A to B using canons and wall bounces" and work more on the mecanics than on the visuals... I was honestly disapointed from the moving walls idea, it was really good and underused. Things like this are what could have make this game better.

Side note : I think you should try to make a neon / laser theme for the game, it will work great :)

Good job!

Design 4/5 : the sound effects were loud as hell  ^^ but the game looks really nice. I wish you made a better indication of your next direction.

Theme 5/5 : good fit into the theme.

Originality  5/5 : i've honestly never played smth like this, good idea!

I damn suck at this game ^^ but I like it as it is. Best I've seen so far. Maybe you could add a death count somewere? I'll break the record ever time ! 

Good job!

Design 3/5 : I don't like the black background with just the text, it is too simple IMO. The assets and music look good tho.

Theme 5/5 : 1 directional is a nice fit into the theme

Originality  4/5 : seen before (in mobile games) but still not enough for me to duck more stars.

The controls were not really intuitives... The game looks good with cute art and nice music. I'll still say that it lacks smth like a cool move / combo, the slide was nice but it need to be more useful. I don't get why you have to use the moves to earn coins, but you can turn this into smth like a "reality show" were your style earns you money (for exemple).

Good job!

Fun and a just hard enougth to get addictive. You can make a nice little mobile game from this. On a design perspective, this is just a bit uninspired IMO but it sticks to the theme. Good job !