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Thanks for this! I will try to speed up my discovery of the region because I got stuck trying to hunt and ended fighting animated corpses :P

I really like your system as it allows me to know just the information my character can notice and it has room for making things up on top of what it is provided.

Thanks!

Congrats on releasing a new issue!

I am still playing the first one using Random Realities by Cezar Capacle as my main oracle and I am enjoying it very much!

Could you please release an image with all the three issues, hexmaps joined together? I have seen they all touch each other and it would be nice. 

Thanks for your hard work!

Great to see you back!

I have just downloaded it, print it and I hope to be able to play it in two weeks. Thanks a lot for your efforts!

Character keeper ENG: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1YYWlTq8TYrdLHNQX1lpw0-9228-1DRyzWT5Fn1kH...

Character Keeper ESP: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1evM1tpG_iODTP2T0I3IZSmqBPuM0l8trSp39Ihmy...

This game really looks very interesting but I do not understand the move action, The clock says to move clockwise but the first box inside the clock says counterclockwise.

Could you please give an example of an actual play?

Thanks a lot

“A special thanks to NalumTei. Your assistance with editing and proofreading was both encouraging and helpful. I am forever thankful.”

Thanks to you for being an inspiration. The  zine’s name is truly Alone Together :)

I am always waiting for the end of the month to read the new issue and I share it with the Spanish Telegram group. Keep up with the good work, you are not alone :)

This issue’s proofreading:

Page 4: Four Against Darkness’ section: “Bored and just wanting to blow of some steam?” should be “blow off”.

The Dungeon Dive’ section: “Reviews are well-thought out” should be “well-thought-out” or “well thought out”: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/es/diccionario/ingles/well-thought-out

DNDCharacter.com’ section: “proclemation” should be “proclamation”.

“Maybe Im just easily impressed,” should be “I’m” or “I am”.

Page 5’s last line “Of course, one cant mention pbp without discussing its accessbility.” should be “can’t” and “accessibility”.

Page 8: “But what if we didnt have to rely

on a third party for…” should be “didn’t”.

“But are loads of d100 tables needed for everything? I would argue, no, they arent” should be “aren’t”.

“… but also notice that constantly flipping to and fro between my journal…” should be “from”.

“The challenge. The next time…” might be “The challenge: the next time…”

Page 11: “Players have loads of options, kit, and tactics to choose from…” might be “kits”, in plural.

“A word of advice. Bring some allies or NPC’s.” might be “A word of advice: bring some allies or NPC’s.”

Page 12: Review If Looks Could Kill. “Players take on the role of hire hands sent to… should be “hired hands”

Page 13: layout’ section: “… but sometimes feels like a lot of of information per page…” should be “a lot of information”

Page 15: “ Layout (+++)” seems to have one blank character before the word because it is not aligned with its paragraph below.

Does it solo?’ Section: “Make sure to get your d20's warmed up and a small band of misfts ready to…” should be “misfits”.

Page 18: “Key 3: Meet your accuser” seems to have more blank spaces after the colon than “Key 2:”.

Page 22: “A sickly voice make you look up.” should be “makes”

Recommendations:

Regarding solo play and pbp: there is a game for two players called Tether which you might find interesting: https://adambaffoni.itch.io/tether

Check out Fast Fantasy and its three Adventure Starters in the last three pages: https://bassbuilt.itch.io/fast-fantasy-tabletop-rpg

Take a look into the gane The Lantern: https://blind-archivist.itch.io/the-lantern

Thank you again!

Espero poder enviarle a David la traducción mañana. 

Hazme un favor, échale un ojo cuando salga publicada aquí para ver si hay algún error que se me haya pasado.

Gracias.

Hello again! Thank you for another great issue.

I have found a typo in the Key-Lock adventure “The last supper” -> “You’re friend” should be “Your friend”.

Thank you

Que te digan "¡Tírame del dedo!" en una sesión de espiritismo y que al tirar acabes con un dedo ajeno en la mano. ¡Gran aporte a la jam!

Me ha gustado mucho. Yo creo que este se podría ampliar a un tríptico y sería genial para jugar en trenes y aviones. O quizá una carta para exploración, otra para encuentros y una tercera con las instrucciones. Anímate a hacerlo, que tiene pinta incluso de poder tener su propia jam para hacerle expansiones :)

Gracias por tu comentario. Ya nos contarás qué tal fue y si seguís siendo amigos :P

¡Gracias por comentar! Si lo pruebas, no dudes en contarme qué mejorar. Ojalá te guste

Found it! Thanks. The Feed section is indeed not very prominent in this web design. 

I have been following you for 53 days and I cannot see your posts in the developer logs. I also normally receive an email when someone I follow writes something… Could you please share a link to your latest post? Thanks

Sigo trabajando en ella. Febrero y marzo me vinieron con muchas gripes pero ya estoy mejor y sigo traduciendo. Te avisaré cuando la tenga

Glad to help! Just a question: at the beginning of the issue you say:

“Over the last couple weeks there has been a change of vision as it relates to the zine’s design and path forward. If you read the biweekly posts then you're already familiar with this news.”.

Where can I find those posts? Do you have a blog?

Thanks.

Hi! Thanks for the new issue!

I have noticed a few typos, in case you are still on time to correct them:

- page 6, chapter Asking the Question, in the second paragraph: “Its simple and can be answer with random tables.”. It should be “answered”.

- page 7, chapter Asking the Question, in the last paragraph of the left column: “More often than nought”. It should be “not”.

- page 7, chapter Asking the Question, in the last paragraph of the left column: “Keep answers you like and mark off ones you dont.”. It should be “don’t”.

- page 17, table of NPCs at the right: “Sabatoge”. It should be “Sabotage”.

- page 17, table of gossips: “Supernatural. Crewmembers effected by the recent solar flares”. It should be “affected”.

- page 18, table of creature behaviors: “…as its head slowly moves to and fro, looking at things unseen.”. It should be “from”.

Thanks again. I have liked the key-lock adventure and its random tables. 

Every month I am waiting for this magazine :)

Keep up with the good work!

Este es un gran hack de Jerséis de Erizo que he disfrutado mucho jugando ya que te da la suficiente información para poder montar una historia pero te da mucha flexibilidad para elegir qué tipo de historia quieres crear. 

Estoy deseando que Zeta saque alguna versión más.

Can I take the torch? I have already created the Character Keeper so Having everything in Spanish would be fantastic.

Updated! Thank you!

Great! Is there anything you would like to be improved?

Hi! I am currently creating an online Character Keeper for this game and I have a question regarding the Forsworn archetype: in the move "Sworn Oaths" it says "For each oath you swear to your patron, choose a Power appropriate to your patron.".

Is this "Power" a reference to the Mystic's Power move? In this case, can a player choose the Power "… add +1 , once or more per roll ( how?)" too?

Thanks.

P.D.: This is the template for the Character Keeper in its 1.1 version: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1YYWlTq8TYrdLHNQX1lpw0-9228-1DRyzWT5Fn1kH...

Wow! Thank you very much for this explanation. Your ideas are fantastic! 

Hi! This is a great game and I am enjoying much! Could you please tell me how to create a Monk? I thought I would use the Mystic playbook but the Inflict Harm move says 

“Roll 3 dice. If you inflict harm …

• … with magic, use the highest die

• … with crude violence, use the lowest die

and if you are exploiting a weakness, add +1”

So it does not the best playbook to play a martial artist with fast movement and some magical powers.

How would you create a monk? Thanks.

I would love to see that Spanish version!

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Great table! Number 5 is missing on the Emotions table, just before "Uncertainty" :)