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I see you're talking about my comment, which the creator apparently has deleted.

I will be short, and not as crass, so people know what you are talking about:

I feel like Melanie is the main character of the story, because everything MC does, he either has to check with her to see if she permits it, or she outright orders you to do things, while always humiliating the MC.

I understand that others don't see it like that, but what saddens me even more than being disappointed with the game, is to see that while my point of view is not that of the majority, it isn't even allowed.

I sincerely respect authors that allows contradictory, critical or even harsh comments to stay on their game page, because it gives a broader viewpoint for others to judge the game. At least, I always look for both the best and the worst ratings/comments, to see if there's something that someone else noticed that might change my anticipation going in, possibly making it a better experience.

Any way, I said I was going to be short. That's my take, and as long as people argue and debate against my review, not me, I don't mind being called out, so I hope the creator will allow this comment to stay.

Thank you so much for your reply. I understand that we see the events unfolding in this game through different lenses. I said it in my comment intro, but you gained a lot of respect with your reply.

Mainly, I don't like playing an MC that gets assaulted by the women in the story for asking a completely understandable question, instead of answering it, and facing no consequences for being violent and abusive. I have seen abusive women depicted as 'playful banter' in too many AVNs to find it cute.

I do hope those who enjoy your game will continue to enjoy it, but I doubt I ever will feel interested in these women, unless you rewrite the beginning to allow MC to exact consequences on them for being violent and abusive. At least as I see them through my lenses.

Again, thank you for your reply.

I play AVNs, rate and comment on them, and add them to my public collections, if anyone wants to see my opinion. I don't want anyone to hate on authors, even me. With that said, I know I am human, and therefore can be crass in my comments, but no matter if I hate the game, I don't hate the author. I sincerely respect authors who allows critical, and sometimes even harsh, comments to stay on their page. I try to write my reviews and comments without any major spoilers,, but be warned, there might be some. Alright, enough self-promotion and emotional blackmail.

!!NB!! There may be spoilers ahead !!NB!!

At first glance, the artwork and characters look good. The navigation system is a bit janky, but it gets the job done well enough without being any real hassle.

Azraesha lost my interest when she assaulted and tried to murder the MC, instead of answering a question. Lost interest in Naomi too for trying to murder the MC. I don't feel any desire to spend time with either of them after they have both shown themselves to be homicidal, abusive psychopaths. Azraesha is the only one that can teach you to control your magic, so you are  forced to spend time with her, but Naomi doesn't even have that going for her, she is just a big lumbering musclehead that enjoys trying to murder MC in as many humiliating ways as possible, especially when trying to improve you physical level stat, distracting and bothering the MC to the point he loses the VERY HEAVY  benchpress weights on his chest, and what does she, your supposed spotter, do? Laught at you for hurting yourself.  It is especially revolting how she forces herself on Caitlin in their first encounter; first she assaults her and exposes her against her will, then she lays her hands on Caitlin, pretending to be a friend instead of an obnoxious, demanding, homicidal psychopath that just seconds earlier were ready to strangle her.

The phone game in the beginning really infuriates me; why do you have to choose an obviously wrong answer for the last question, when there's TWO CORRECT answers to choose from? Is it a fourth-wall-breaking-moment, to show us that AVNs are often buggy?

Caitlin is so far the most likable character, in that she hasn't attempted to murder the MC. Yet.

At this point, I really don't feel like playing anymore, because it feels like I have come to a point where I have to become the whipping boy of Naomi to advance the story of the other characters, and I am not interested in anything more from her than being an exercise partner to raise my physical level. Which I can't do because I have rejected becoming Naomi's whipping boy, meaning she won't let you get further in the story.

And NO! I will not dream up a bathroom for these murderous psychopaths, as I VERY clearly chose when these women demanded it in front of the bathroom. They can fight eachother until they learn to share, or remove eachother from the house for all I care. They haven't shown themselves to be worthy of any rewards or attention beyond what's necessary to learn how to get out of this trap. (Currently on day 32)

I am now more interested in seeing what the fridge or closet spits out, than I am in spending time with Azraesha and Naomi. I met those two in the first in-game week, and within two days of being introduced, they both tried to murder the MC. And neither of them care. In Naomi's murder attempt, she tries to claim she went 'a little' over board, but shows no remorse whatsoever. Instead, she degrades the MC as a wimp for almost dying. Azraesha pretends it never happened, and that she is the bestest friend ever to the MC. Don't worry about her lies, her deceit, her assault, her murder attempt, she is the goddess you have a sacred duty to worship.

I am aware that there's more content in this AVN than I have found, but I can't recommend this, based on the fact that the other characters are trying to murder the MC almost as soon as they see him, and there's no consequences for them. As is proper, since your choices don't matter. At least, they haven't mattered so far. If you choose to pretend you're a great magician when meeting Azraesha, she will provide you a sexual service, and still assault and attempt to murder you the second day after you met. If you try to tell her that you have no control, she assaults you and try to murder you the second day after you met. If you try to choose 'middle-of-the-road' answers, she assaults you and try to murder you the second day after you met. Why? Because I dared to ask her to explain herself, since she was talking about magic, which the MC knows nothing about. Instead of explaining anything to the MC, she assaults the MC and smothers him with a pillow. A clear attempt at murder.

With no consequences enacted on these characters for their attempted murders, there is no longer any reason, even within this game's setting and story, for the MC to do anything for, or with, these women. Had they at least shown a sliver of a hint of remorse for their homicidal natures, I could have kept my interest, but since they don't, and they never stop their demands of the MC, without ever doing anything for the MC, only for their own selfish desires, I lost complete interest in what seemed like an interesting concept for a story.

Edit: There is no autosave in this game. If you don't manually save, you WILL lose hours and hours of gameplay.

Of course, how could I be so wrong ;-P

I play AVNs, rate and comment on them, and add them to my public collections, if anyone wants to see my opinion. I don't want anyone to hate on authors, even me. With that said, I know I am human, and therefore can be crass in my comments, but no matter if I hate the game, I don't hate the author. I sincerely respect authors who allows critical, and sometimes even harsh, comments to stay on their page. I try to write my reviews and comments without any major spoilers,, but be warned, there might be some. Alright, enough self-promotion and emotional blackmail.

!!NB!! There may be spoilers ahead !!NB!!

Upon seeing MC's wife, Sara, I immediately went to YouTube and played the intro-song from Team America, because the characters in this game reminds me of the characters in that film, just a bit more polished. And no strings of course.

The women are very sexy, and while there isn't all that much content yet, you feel like the characters are relatable, and their situation is exactly how you expect someone to react to a zombie apocalypse: With fear and suspicion, but not enough of it, because the scale of what is happening is too much for the victims to handle, resorting to doing everyday things when they deep down know they really should be preparing for the next hour, the next day, the next week.

In the end of day 6.5alpha, I believe our 'heroes' is a bit naive and too trusting of their destination, but I hope they'll be alright.

Looking forward to the next update of this game!

Thank you. Glad to see my efforts have helped someone. I looked at those games in my Recommended collection, and saw I hadn't written much in the text. I'm not certain you can see the text, but if you can, I added a bit more to both of them.

In short, both games are great games that I was lucky enough to find early on (OIALT), or see through early development (Eternum) when I first found out about AVNs.

I play AVNs, rate and comment on them, and add them to my public collections, if anyone wants to see my opinion. I don't want anyone to hate on authors, even me. With that said, I know I am human, and therefore can be crass in my comments, but no matter if I hate the game, I don't hate the author. I sincerely respect authors who allows critical, and sometimes even harsh, comments to stay on their page. I try to write my reviews and comments without any major spoilers,, but be warned, there might be some. Alright, enough self-promotion and emotional blackmail.

This review is written while playing this game for the first time.

!!NB!! There may be spoilers ahead !!NB!!

My first question, is what the background music is when meeting the principal, Mrs Jackson? I have heard it before, but can't remember where or when. And for some reason I feel like there should be the words "Now it's time for business, now it's time for work, now it's time for business, now it's time for work, now..."" attached to that music.

A little overwhelming with so many characters introduced in such a short time, but at the same time, it fits the story and mood of starting a teaching job.

So far, the girls have seemed interested without being psychopaths, which too many AVNs do. We are introduced to a character that is meant to be a psychopath, but even that one is a cute version of "don't stick your D in Crazy".

The scene to inform the player of how to gain with the women, is a different take on the fourth-wall-breaking-sidekick/persona-of-the-author, while not breaking the fourth wall, keeping it within the game's storyline. (Those sidekicks and interludes can be hilarious, but aren't needed, nor wanted in all games)

When MC is in the shower, I feel like I'm in a sci-fi game; the MC is submerged in a futuristic, blue liquid, and the showerhead is some energy-disperser, making the blue liquid agitate around MC. While I seriously doubt that's what the author was aiming for, I think it is nice, and for some reason even fits the game and mood it sets.

The MC has so far (Saturday) shown himself to be as insecure as you expect of someone starting in a new job, while not being insecure of himself.

I recommend this game for those who want a good game with an enticing storyline, good artwork and character graphics, and has a dominant streak

Can someone please tell me why the MC helps these women? I don't see any reason why he should want to do anything for any of them, except that he is a mindless automaton.

I was more interested in watching the sCoin miner screen than I was in interacting with any of the women, because none of them care about MC, they only care about themselves. Even those characters that are supposed to love him and be his friends, don't care about MC, only how MC will improve their life. They give no consideration to how they might help him.

Rosetta is one of the characters that really makes you feel like a rotten dogshit for having the audacity to do her bidding as you were ordered, giving you a glare that says she wants to torture you to death in the most gruesome ways possible as a reward.

Teresa looks at you as if you're such a moron you're going to fall down and break your neck sitting still on a stool when spending time with her, while humiliating MC, so really great motivation to do anything for her.

And how does a 12-year old girl in pajamas put MC, a character that just kicked an adult woman 150 feet away, into a coma with a gentle tap on his back? And WHY?!?!

As far as I can tell: To cover up the plothole of why MC isn't allowed to make a choice of which club he wants to join, and to make sure he got humiliated in front of the entire school. Sure, the text in the game explains it as a test, but why did that test have to happen in front of the school, and only leave the humiliating aftermath for every student and teacher to see? Why couldn't that test have been done in the gym, or in an alleyway, or forest clearing when MC was alone? Why did MC need to be humiliated in front of every one he's going to go to school with, on his first day of school?

The amount of grinding you have to do in this game, and how  high levels you have to have with the women  to obtain anything that starts to resemble sex, is also a HUGE turn-off, especially combined with the narcissistic characters of the women that either hand all the work over to MC, humiliate you for some imagined slight your presence has caused her, or just for being as stupid and unaware as the MC is portrayed.

I understand there is much more content than what I have seen in my playthrough so far, but I am sincerely asking someone to tell me a reason, from the game, why the MC should even care to help these women, beyond it being school curriculum/plot armor, and the sex-scenes, because in the first eight hours of playing this game, I couldn't find a single reason, either implicitly or explicitly stated. We are told why MC is at the school; special abilities, but none of the characters give MC any reason to want to help them or spend time with them, because none of them treat MC as a person, just a slave to do their work for them, buy things for them, be their therapist, their plaything.

Even when levelling up characters, which takes a lot of grinding, and usually means you have to wait several days, or a week, after obtaining the XP, to actually access the level-up event, the characters show no gratitude, they don't get any friendlier with MC, they just get more and more and more demanding.

Far too little story and characters to make any real impression. You can choose a few paths, but the one where you choose to play, needs better instructions for the minigames/QTEs.

This seems to want to become an AVN where basketball, and playing it within this game, is the main focus, so if you're interested in basketball, unlike me, you might find this more entertaining.

I play AVNs, rate and comment on them, and add them to my public collections, if anyone wants to see my opinion. I don't want anyone to hate on authors, even me. With that said, I know I am human, and therefore can be crass in my comments, but no matter if I hate the game, I don't hate the author. I sincerely respect authors who allows critical, and sometimes even harsh, comments to stay on their page. I try to write my reviews and comments without any major spoilers,, but be warned, there might be some. Alright, enough self-promotion and emotional blackmail.

This review is written while playing this game for the first time.

!!NB!! There may be spoilers ahead !!NB!!

My first thought when starting the game, is that the text is a bit small. On smaller screens, or if you sit far from the screen, it's somewhat tiring to read.

The character you're shown when starting the game looks pleasantly alien and yet human(oid) enough not to feel uncanny.

The artwork is very good, and even though it so far has been more or less static poses of the characters you interact with, combined with a lot of text, this demo shows some real promise for the future. The story is engaging, and the characters feel like real characters.

I am unsure of how well the creator will be able to implement their personality-not-stats gameplay, because that is a task that require much more storytelling, and therefore can go badly, but I hope they manage to continue as well as they have done in this demo.

The freeroaming interface fits the aesthetics of the backgrounds/locations, and while I'm not saying it needs it, but it may be worth considering whether to make some icons/images for the locations going forward.

As I said from the start, the biggest issue I have with this game, is the text-size. 1-3 pts larger font should make it easier to read, while not making it feel too imposing on the screen. Especially considering how the game's interface shows text; in lower-left quadrant of the screen.

Edit: Final verdict of this demo is that you should try it. It is a very promising glimpse of what has the potential to be great.

As of writing this, the creator's Patreon page's last post is from April 2023, with the heading "Update on the situation". The page was active from its launch, until that date.

Minor speculation on my part, but it would appear this game is abandoned.

The creator has said on their Patreon page that there will be no more games or updates. If you wish to try a game that will never be finished, go ahead.

I have started playing and rating AVNs, and add them to my public collections. I do not wish for anyone to hate on any author, not even me, but I know I can be quite crass in my comments, and I am only human. That said, I sincerely respect authors that don't block someone for criticism, and I will stop my self-promotion there.

This review is being written as I am playing the game for the first time.

The first thing I noticed, was that I missed a dialog box, or a choice in the settings to set opacity of a dialog box. I know it will mean that some parts of the scene will be covered, but I would rather have an easier time reading the story, and have to press H to hide it if there's something I want to see in full. I have yet to play more than two minutes when writing this.

After about 45 minutes of playtime, I am really interested in knowing about the mysterious woman in th cafe. In many AVNs, I don't feel interested in getting to know characters or their motivation, simply go with the flow because that's what the story requires, but this game has so far managed to capture my curiosity.

GREAT WIDE GRIN at the sound effects and situation on your first day of school :-D

Starting the night on the first day of school, I am glad to see that the two guy friends you have, are both different, and to a small extent the same, while also not being too obnoxious or pushy or wimpy, like many AVNs do with male friends.

!!NB!! I am unsure if I can manage to keep from doing spoilers from here on, so be warned. !!NB!!

Like the warning we're given during the night about our choices. It very lightly ruins your immersion, but I am glad of both ways; tell the player, or let the player find out for themselves. There are advantages to both, and in a game that is as good as this one seems to be so far, I wouldn't be opposed to either approach.

Not a fan of the music during your interaction with Serena.

Glad to see the creator is aware that men should also be wary of accepting drinks from strangers.

At the end of the second day of school, I'm glad to be torn about who to choose when I have the choice between MC's guy friends and the women I am trying to seduce. I am also glad to see that you get to choose whether or not to pursue a relationship with someone.

I am also dying to know what the deal is with Kenji and everything else surrounding him.

I guess I'll end my first-impression review there. Game time is about 2.5 hrs.

TLDR: Engaging storyline, exciting personalities, great artwork, manages to make the guy friends feel like friends you don't want to reject because they're just side characters, as many AVNs do. Highly recommend this game!

A good storyline that never feels forced or stale, about a man reborn in another body and life, with the help of a shinigami (japanese for death god(s)/god(s) of death). The character models are wonderfully created, none of them feels uncanny in any way, not even Shinigami when she has pink eyes with heart-shaped pupils, and horns.

All the characters feel as real as an AVN can make a character feel real. You feel differently about each of them, and want to help all of them for different reasons, and you want to be with them all for different, but also the same reasons.

The interludes with DD is also a masterpiece of summary, teasing, entertainment and announcement of upcoming events, without ever giving it all away to the player.

Keep up the great work, Devil's Dad!

I loved this game, with its razer-sharp wit and absurd, yet hilarious and engaging story.

But Lindsey..... poor girl. As far as I can tell, she is meant to be in her twenties, but the first thought I had when seeing her, were "Oh, how nice that Lily has found a replacement grandma who cares for her!", because there's SOMETHING about her face that makes her look like she's about 70. It is the only problem I have with this game, and it's a very small problem.

Looking forward to further updates.

A great start, where it seems like your choices will matter, and you can choose which relationships to pursue. Not that much content yet, even with a few different paths.

I am interested to see where the story goes, and hope the creator continues it with the same great quality that's been shown us so far.

This game is best summed up with the encounter with Falesha: You have to be a spineless slave and fucktoy to every bitch you meet, doesn't matter if she is a complete stranger you met five minutes ago, because if you refuse to help her, it is game over. Literally. The creator actually kills you/restarts the game if you don't immediately bow down to every bitch you meet and obey her every command.

The creator even has the nerve to berate you for refusing to help a pretty girl. What pretty girl? Falesha is barely a shadow in shadows, we haven't even been able to see her face or body, because she is a black woman, wearing black clothes on a black background, in a VERY dimly lit cafe, and she has been barely visible for six lines of text. We don't know the character at all, we haven't even been given a decent view of her features, but if you choose to refuse her, it is game over.

It doesn't matter which choices you make, the story and your relationships doesn't change a bit, you only potentially miss out on boring sex scenes. An example of this is in the very beginning, where you get the choice to peek on Lily in the shower or not. Doesn't matter if you choose not to do it, she still degrades MC for spying on her, and he apologizes as if he did it, when he didn't.

And the 'mystery' of his parents doesn't seem to matter to him at all. Otherwise, he would have demanded some answers from Megan. Instead, he trusts the one person who has shown herself able to commit computer crimes and privacy invasions against him, to help him solve the 'mystery'. The only character you have less reason to trust than Falesha, is the character you choose to trust with your supposedly most important part of life.

Once I got the Game Over for refusing to help Falesha, I stopped playing, because it was obvious the creator wanted to tell a story I wasn't interested in reading, not making a game.

*Me silently snickering*

I am starting to realize that you might be right. My collection of games to stay away from grows much faster than my collection of recommended games.

That's the question I'm asking myself while playing this, since NOONE in this game appreciates anything you do for them, and constantly assault, humiliate and belittle you for simply existing. Why does the MC even care about any of them? There is NOTHING in this game to explain why you're the scapegoat for everything that's wrong in the vault, including everyone's relationshp issues and exam results, except being a man (or considered a man if you choose a female body). None of the bitches ever ask you for help, they demand it, and the MC, being a wet rag, never says no or demands anything in return.

NOONE  but Nikki ever does anything FOR the MC, yet he even helps them cover up their crimes, because.................. WHY?!!?  Why does the MC agree to be everyone's slave? It doesn't change anything  in any way, the other characters still use you like a slave while treating you worse than dogshit under your shoe. I understand that in an AVN, the sex is supposed to be the reward, but there needs to be a reason why you even start to care abaout the characters and want to help them, and none of these characters, except Nikki, makes you want to start, and continue, to help them.

I recognize that Libi is supposed to be a friendly character, yet she is as bad as everyone else, ordering the MC around, belittling him and conserns herself only with her own satisfaction, MC be damned.

What is supposed to be MC's motivation for enduring this torture and enslavement? There is nothing in this game that explains it in any way, except that they're women and you're a man (or considered one, at least), so therefore you're automatically their slave and whipping boy.

Lastly, what's the point of showing us a choice to use Charisma to acquire the lube, when it can't be used even when you have 30/15 Charisma?

This game is abandoned. As of writing this, it has been 2.5 years since it got an update.

The first character you meet, Jenny, the doctor, looks like a 70-year old socialite that's gotten addicted to plastic surgeries and hairdyes. The second character you meet, Jasmin, looks like a trap who opted for ginormous breast implants. Sara is the typical shy-nice-girl-but-secretly-a-deviant clichè. CatGirl is rude, obnoxious and creepy.

The game is a grind-game, and it takes about a week of in-game time to grind to the next level with characters, even with daily interactions.

And this game commits one of the greatest sins of visual storytelling: It TELLS you, but doesn't SHOW you.

It is ok as an absurd little thing to pass time with once or twice, but even if it was still in development, I wouldn't really recommend it to anyone.

There is too little story and too boring characters  in  Chapter 1 to make me interested in playing this game any further. The most defining part of it, for me, was how much I wanted to dig out the over-painted eye-crud on Alexis. It was so distracting I barely managed to see she is an athlete, and I didn't even notice she had cornrows until she was shown in the ending screens. None of the women seems interesting, and knowing that one of them is a thief doesn't make them any more endearing. Kevon is a typical jock-party-all-night clichè. 

I tried playing through this a few times, with different choices, but regardless of the choices you make, there is nothing in Chapter 1 that entices me to want to play Chapter 2 and further. The ending doesn't make it feel urgent to solve why it happened, it just feels like it doesn't concern the MC at all after the party, because you haven't made any connections with any of them (even if choosing the 'right' choice in conversations), you have only been roped into providing free services for these women, and get a roid-rager as an enemy because of it.

And I can't put my finger on what exactly it is, but Sara is creepy as all H. I tried talking to her while at every alco-level, and there's just something wrong with her that makes me feel creeped out, and hoping that MC won't have to interact with her at all.

Judging from what we get to see in Chapter 1, I wouldn't recommend this game to anyone, especially not for a price.

I don't expect the creators to like my review, but I do hope they respect that people have differing opinions, and allow others to see that not everyone who tries this game thinks it's the greatest game of all time. I genuinely respect creators that don't rage-block me for a bad review, because I may not like your game, but I do respect that integrity of character.

I lost count of how many times I thought to myself "YOU HAVE THE POWER OF TWO GODDESSES!! USE THEM!!!" while playing this game. The MC is so scared of his powers he never actually spends any time trying to control them or understand them, but oh, how he ponders every single way of avoiding using his powers on anyone, every single interlude.

I guess you can say that Hecate is the author's way of breaking the fourth wall, and somehow imply that things will be different in later updates. But, at the moment, this story is an exercise in frustration and exasperation.

Rin is an annoying, dumb, shortsighted, pushy, demanding, heartless exhibitionist with no respect for anyone. Lin is a sullen edgelord with jealousy problems. Molly is an overprotective, stressing and suffocating character. David is just completely intolerable; good manners is as foreign to him as the environment on Proxima-7 is to the world at large. Miss Collins is a sadistic rapist with a god-complex. Annie is insufferably helpless. The MC is an overwrought, indecisive wet rag, regardless of whether he uses Hecate's powers (dominant route) or not. Instead of using his powers, the MC lets the whole world fall and crumble to dust around him, lets Rin  and Ms Collins control his actions, lets Annie get hurt, lets Lin get hurt, lets Emily get hurt, lets Molly get hurt, commits sexual crime for your 'friend' David. The MC is supposed to have the power of two goddesses FFS!!! He could easily have used either one, or both, on any one at any time to avoid it all, but whenever it's time to use the powers, when the story actually cries out for the MC to use his powers, you aren't given a choice, you are only being shown how insecure and stupid the MC is, and always ends up choosing the wrong choice, making everything worse everytime.

The only time you feel as if the MC is using even one tenth of Hecate's power, is when you use it on Ms Collins. And as said, it only feels like a tenth of Hecate's power within MC at that time in the story.

I tried playing this through several times to make sure I didn't just have a bad playthrough, choosing to use Hecate's power the few times you're allowed to make a choice to use your powers, choosing to never use her powers and refuse her. I chose different answers, closer to the truth, closer to her fantasy, in Rin's dreamwalk. I chose to stay hidden, I chose to reveal myself to Annie's father. I chose exculpatory answers at the police station, I chose incriminating answers. I tried doing things as differently as possible each time, and each time I kept screaming the same thing in my head: "YOU HAVE THE POWER OF TWO GODDESSES!! USE THOSE POWERS TO SOLVE YOUR PROBLEMS!!! STOP BEING SUCH A SCAREDY-CAT AND USE YOUR POWERS!!! YOU HAVE THEM FOR A REASON!!! *PLUS* THEY GET STRONGER THE MORE YOU USE THEM, SO F-ING USE THEM!!!"

The general idea of this game is an interesting one, but the execution is horrible. As Hecate once tells the MC: You could have total control over everyone if you weren't such a feckless scaredy-cat, afraid to use your divine gifts.

I sincerely HOPE the MC finally enters puberty and his balls finally drop later in the story, but so far there's no hint of that ever happening, regardless of which path you choose.

Edit: I played v2.6

Thank you. I respect any author that doesn't get angry at those leaving bad reviews/scathing comments on their games. I may not like your game, but I do respect you for being so polite.

This game has a nasty bug: If you use your phone or computer while having chosen Auto, you will either a) get stuck in a cam share loop until the cum bucket is full, or b) you will receive a message saying you can't do that right now (because of unmet conditions), then Auto kicks in, and starts the event anyway, except you're still stuck in the phone interface, and there's no images, just text, or c) you will get forwarded in the Shamazon shop, to items that doesn't yet exist and you don't have money for, if you use either the PayGal or Shamazon app.

It is VERY easy to overcome, just unselect Auto before doing anything on the phone or computer, but it is a bit of a nuisance to have remember to work around this bug.

The second bug I have encountered may be a gamebreaking one (or there might not be any content yet): After my second visit to Club Naughty, and having managed to raise the level of every woman there, on my third visit I am approached by the bouncer, and then I tell myself I have to talk to the bartender to sort it out. Then  I get three choicces; 1) Replay Intro 2) Lower Arousal 3) Talk to bouncer. If I choose talk to the bouncer, a tutorial screen pops up and it resets: He approaches me, I tell myself I have to talk to the bartender to sort it out, get three choices, and the tutorial-screen shows up again. And again, and again, and again, and.... The two other choices don't do anything to break this loop, and my only choice is to leave for home or Rebecca's place.

I suspect that this bug (if it is one) is connected to the first bug, and that my being caught in a few loops without clearing the game state (reverting to a point before, or starting a new game) may have caused this.

This game is surreal and pushes the boundaries of disbelief, but the story is captivating, and I only wish there was already more content for this game.

Artwork is good. And that's the only compliment I can give this game.

I post comments like the one above, because I am allowed to voice my opinion, and I would like to inform other players that this game is not a good game.

You said this game is as good as a few others, and I have tried those other games you listed, even love them. Because they have character development, this game doesn't. Because those games have consequences of your choices, this game doesn't. Because those games have a story, this game doesn't. Because those games have a diversity of characters/personalities, this game doesn't.

Just because someone is a decent visual artist, does not mean they know how to make a game, write a good story, or that their game is good simply because they are a decent visual artist.

The only difference in the story, is whether or not you get to see boring sex-scenes. There's nothing else new. Unlike one of the games you mentioned, Good Girl Gone Bad, where I can find new things in story and scenes even after playing it more than 200 times (not an exaggeration). This game is empty after you've played through it 'wrong' and then 'right'.

Eve never changes, Cassie never changes, the MC never changes, the story never changes, the events never change, your choices never change, your relationships never change. It is fine to make a VN where you simply want to tell a story, but then you don't get to claim, as the author of this game does, that your choices matter, or that there's eighteen different paths, when every path contains the exact same lines from the exact same characters in the exact same positions in the exact same events, no matter which choices you make. As I've said several times, the only difference of your choices is whether you get to see a few boring sex-scenes or not.

I played this as the nicest, most helpful guy possible the first time, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. I played this game as the nastiest, most hateful guy possible the second time, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. I tried being nice to Eve and stay away from Cassie the third time I played, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. I tried being cruel to Eve and kind to Cassie, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. I tried telling them everything, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. I tried telling them nothing, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. Tried being kind without buying gifts, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. Tried staying away from Kelly, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my prvacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. I tried starting a relationship with Kelly, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave.

The only difference your choices make, is whether or not you get to see a few boring sex-scenes. Absolutely nothing else changes.

Respect to you. While I don't expect an author to like such a scathing comment, I do respect that you nonetheless take it in somewhat good spirits.

Slow progress is one thing; I characterize that as 1-3 update/year, but this hasn't received an update in 2.5 years. That's not slow progress, that's an abandoned project.

What a cast of thorougly unlikable characters. None of them has any redeeming qualities whatsoever. They're disgusting, revolting, rude, obnoxious, repulsive, bitchy, demanding, spineless, heartless and/or downright ugly.

The best character in this game is the stray dog you find, which then lives in your room doing absolutely nothing.

I have played through this VN (0.4) several times, and made different choices every time, but I still don't know anything about what this game's story is, beyond traveling in time to meet people, mostly women, who obviously knows everything about you and everything that's happening, yet NEVER gives a straight answer, just make fun of MC, gaslight and deflect. And MC never calls them on it.

Your supposed archenemy doesn't feel scary or powerful at all, he is just the designated BBEG.

The quizzes and QTEs are intrusive and destroys what little immersion the game manages to impart.

The characters doesn't make you feel like you want to be with them, do things for them, or even talk to them, because they either make fun of you, or sexually assault you, unless they're gaslighting you or ordering you around. And if you choose the 'right' answer, you may start a relationship where you're gaslit, sexually assaulted and ordered around to do things for one of the NPCs. But nothing ever happens FOR the MC, he is just zapped around in time, told to do whatever, and none of the choices have any real impact on the story. You still meet everyone, you still have to go through every quiz, you still have to do every QTE. And you don't get any more information about WHY you're traveling in time. Sure, you're told an excuse, but it doesn't give you any information whatsoever.

There's barely any sex-scenes at all, and those that are in the game feels like they're there simply because this is meant to be an AVN. It doesn't feel like you have done something for it, or that the character you're with, have any reason to have sex with you. And they're boring and short.

As I said, I have played several times, chosen wrong, chosen right, chosen a bit of everything, and it doesn't matter how many times I read Nas' story about The  Marked War, I still don't understand what any of this has anything to do with time travel and magic, MC or the other characters because there is no hint of an answer to that in this game, or any hint that it will ever be revealed. It feels like you're being led on a wild goose chase, and at the end (if it ever comes, which seems unlikely with the way the ....... non-story of this VN is going) we will still know nothing more than when we had read the description.

Some may argue that MC's flashbacks explain why magic and time travel exists, but they don't. They just show you another time you were gaslit by someone, or had a completely inconsequential conversation that has nothing to do with anything as far as I can tell. I guess they're supposed to make us more comfortable with the character in the flashback, but if that's the case, they do the exact opposite in my opinion.

I was really disappointed with this game. The description and comments on this seemed promising, but the execution is horrible. When playing/watching time travel fantasies, it should feel like an eerie incident to stand behind yourself in the past. This game makes it feel like you're going to work on a Monday morning when doing that.

Yes, the game isn't finished, but at 0.4, which is supposedly 40% of the game, I should have been able to have an inkling of MC's motive, if it's simply to restore time, for his own power and gratification, to save loved ones, because you're part of something greater, because of destiny, etc. And supposedly the story is about you being a Marked one, but after Nas' story in the very beginning, there is nothing more about this topic at all. There's no information about what Marked ones are, there's no information about how magic is learnt by those who aren't part of the magical bloodline, there's no information about what your next quest is, there is no information about who MC is.

You don't have a choice in how to do anything, the NPCs always make all choices for you, you only get to choose whether to be the chopping block and footstool of everyone, or just be the footstool of everyone

Quite the boring game. You are told in the intro  that playing nice will bring more content, but I find it impossible to get immersed in a story where the protagonist just immediately forgives and forgets a decade and a half of abandonment by their landlady because of a three-minute sob story. At least there should be some choice where you confront her with her apathy.

Her claiming she knew your abusive, alcoholic landlord wouldn't hurt you, is just revolting, because she would not have any way of knowing that. An abuser regularly shifts their focus if their preferred target is no longer available.

Sure, there are plenty of sex scenes if you play nice, as we are told in the intro, but there doesn't feel to be a reason that they happen, beyond 'mystical plot armor'.

Sure, this is a game, a fantasy, but even a fantasy needs to be believable to some degree, and I can't believe that anyone, simply for shelter and a three-minute sob story, could immediately forgive and forget a decade and a half of abandonment, especially when you see the luxury mansion she lives in, and you learn what connections she has.

Everyone in this game: Be kind to your landlady and don't ever make her feel bad for abandoning you with an alcoholic and abusive landlord, she was crying for five whole days after that!! Then went on with her life, gained success and a loving family, while the protagonist rotted away in the slums.

I played through 0.14 a few times, so I am not basing this on one single bad palythrough. The story starts off with an unbelievable event, and everything after that is just hollow.

I remember getting to Chapter 10, but I don't remember if the scene in the pool at the gym where Emma and Ruby try to frame you as a sex offender happens in that chapter, or ch11 or 12. I definitely didn't get to chapter 13 or 14.

As I said in my initial comment, until that scene happened I was immersed in the story, and barely noticed the chapter markers. Once that scene played out, I clicked out of the game and uninstalled it, because the story was ruined for me at that point.

After playing seven or eight different routes, and being angry at this game, I finally understood it could be boiled down to one comment:

Choices should have consequences.

Eve is supposedly the submissive character, yet this is not at all reflected anywhere in this game, except the sex-scenes. She starts off the game as a bitch, and no matter how nice or dominant you play, she still continues being a bitch

The story is horribly written. I recognize several points where the creator tries to make something feel scary, or disconcerting, or rage-inducing, but it just feels empty, because the women aren't women I would protect from anything, considering how they treat the MC.

Ugly women, no story, too much focus on the mobile and computer interface you are only able to utilize during location decisions and freeromaing, which means it can only be accessed once per day, when you choose to go to the gym or someone's house, and at night, in your room, because that's the only time you do any location decisions or freeroaming.

The mothers all look like mummified corpses sucking on a lemon, the daughters are boring.

The only compliment I can think of, is that the backgrounds/locations/rooms look good, and proper for the setting of this game.

As soon as I started playing this game, I was hooked, and kept on playing until Emma and Ruby tried to frame the MC as a sex offender for having the audacity to be better than them at sports, and he finds it endearing. I lost complete interest. Up until then, I had been eagerly anticipating the next turn of events, and as soon as that happened, I was clicking out of the game.

You have been nothing but a nice guy to these bitches, and they seriously try to frame you as a sex offender?! Nope, not interested in being the slave to evil, sadistic, spoiled bitches, even in a game. Had there been an option for the MC to let these bitches know that framing a guy for a felony because you're jealous he's better than you at sports, is NOT a valid retaliation, and if any of them ever want to have any relationship with MC again, they had better make it up to MC, I might have kept my interest, but the MC barely even mentions it to these bitches, and has forgiven them even before he is out of danger of being imprisoned for years thanks to their evil, sadistic, spoiled natures. He even rewards them for it!

Too bad, it was an enjoyable game up until that point, but trying to frame someone as a sex offender as revenge for losing at sports, is not an acceptable behaviour, not even in a game, and it should have major impact on the story, not be portrayed as 'just cutesy-girly-teasing" and rewarded. IRL, MC could be facing up to 20 years in prison, be forced to register as a sex offender, and basically have his entire life ruined before he turns 20, simply because some bitches were jealous of being beaten at sports. Yes, it is a game, it is a fantasy, but when several of the characters try to frame you as a sex offender, even in a fantasy, it should have major consequences for the story, and your relationship(s) with those who did it, not just be a minor incident.

MEGA is best used with their desktop app and a FREE account. Once the app is installed, you can copy the link from your browser to the app, and it will download the file for you. Or, if MEGA page actually displays, you can choose on the page to [Download with desktop app] in a small dropdown-menu next to the [Download] button

With a free account, you'll need to wait for six hours once you've hit the transfer quota, but the app will resume the download GUARANTEED after that wait period. In my experience, MEGA is the most reliable filesharing service to exist. Noone else even comes close. It is a minor inconvenience to wait six hours for a >5GB download to finish, if I know for a fact that the download is guaranteed to finish in that time, and that the file is always accessible for download, even as a FREE user/leech of their service. I have not had that experience with any other filesharing service, even when I've paid for it.

Had heard this game mentioned several times as one of the best VNs to exist. Imagine my surprise when I discover one of the worst-written VNs I have tried.

I tried playing this in Sandbox and VN mode, and there is no difference, apart from a lot more clicking in Sandbox mode.

You play as the wettest blanket of a captain that ever existed, having no control over your subordinates, basically being their slave. Nothing at all makes it feel like you are a captain, chosen among hundreds of prospective applicants; you give no orders, you make no decisions, you're a puppet being pulled along according to the whims of your supposed subordinates. There is absolutely no choice in whom you have sexual relations with or when, there's no choice in how your missions go, there's no choice in what type of relationship you have with the girls, there's no choice in whom you spend time with.

And none of the girls are likable or cute in any way, they're demanding, condescending, self-obsessed bitches with HUGE psychological problems that they take out on the MC.

Your choices doesn't affect anything, while being  humiliated, degraded, imprisoned, restrained, choked out, drugged, tortured, belittled, shamed, harassed, assaulted, raped by narcissistic psychopath (alien) Karens every day.

I really wanted to like this game, but the story is too badly written to be enjoyable.

Not worth the time it takes to download and install, since this is a game by Dirty Secret Studio, and therefore effects don't have causes, things just happen. Your choices don't matter, your stats don't matter.

They have absolutely no idea how to build a game interface, often making you click back and forth between locations due to the horribly confusing and downright ugly interface.

The best game this studio has produced, yet it is a shitty mess, clearly evident in the first choice where they present the choice to peek on Clover, with ABSOLUTELY NO WAY of obtaining the necessary Morality stat to actually do that.

This game is just as badly written as all their other games, meaning there is no continuity to the story, things just happen without any discernible cause, and choices don't matter at all

Seemed like a fun game, but it is among the absolutely WORST games I've ever tried. There is no hint of a storyline beyond the background context in the intro, the shop system is horrible, with things spread out over FIVE diferent stores, and changing inventory withing those stores. The inventory system is horrible, especially if you want to give a girl a gift, since the item you want to gift MUST be among the top 8 pieces of inventory, because there is no scrollbar for an inventory that seems to contain dozens of items once you've collected them all. Chatting with the girls does nothing, except repeat the questions: "How do you feel about [other girl]","Do you miss something here?"

If you wish to ask one of the girls something, prepare to go on a manhunt across the camp for several days, because each girl can be asked AT LEAST 7 questions each, but they will only ever answer three at the time, then vanish to some other location, or altogether.

There is NO rhyme or reason to when you get an upgrade point. I have gotten upgrade points after skipping a day entirely. I have gotten upgrade points for doing nothing but aid in construction. I have aided in construction, skipped days, talked to the girls, gifted them gifts, upgraded buildings and haven't gotten any upgrade points. The game also cheats you out of upgrade points, telling you after a battle with a monster that you have gotten an upgrade point, but checking the menu, no points are available.