Nice plain background with detailed things like farm, furnace and minerals, etc. Game mechanic follows the success of the original GROW very well. Maybe try adding some texts below explaining what's the name of each action will really help clearing up the gameplay a bit more.
Hello, I couldn't believe I've just finished reading. I love every bits of the story and I RARELY read anything (I prefer motion picture/game). Very relatable family theme, with lots of interesting personal details about your life in Ca Mau. But it ended quite abruptly (I'm curious about whether you mom won the competition or not? :D). Anyway, thank you for sharing your experience. I'm currently a student game developer in Sai Gon and hoping to make a narrative-driven game of my own. Can you add me on Twitter so that we can have a little chat sometimes?
