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This was great. The humor especially, Biggun having a relative named Larjun is perfect. Great work!

Thanks! Yeah, he isn't too bothered by his condition. I imagine him sounding like Edgar, the bug dude from Men in Black.

Thanks!

Thank you!

And I'm glad you enjoyed!

Indeed, my jam entries are all connected.

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I recommend reading my previous two entries as well, as they are connected!

Thanks!

Glad you enjoyed!

Thanks on the Magpies part, but I gotta give credit to Alrethians Crafts and Battles for Ultra Azures and Planetary Fists in his narrative battle reports!

I'm glad you liked it!

That is true! I had intended on Cogwyn saying something like "What good is strength if one lacks the intelligence to wield it," but it seemed a bit on the nose. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

That's the exact mentality I use! I wanted to tell a story with these alien dudes I had in my head for a while, so in 2020-21 I finally sat down and just, wrote. That's what I do when I see the jam prompts too, think of the base plot, write it, read it with my friends and streamline a bit like if a sentence might run on and whatnot. And hey, if what I made makes someone happy, that's my goal to entertain!

Thank you, I appreciate that! I did one for the previous jam as well as a scifi short story called Zandura. (It's on Amazon but, the sooner I can stop relying on them the better) I hope to keep improving! I'm glad that line worked, I'd seen a video recently poking fun at minis not wearing helmets and thought to take that to a logical conclusion. I'm thinking of continuing this outside of the jam as well but I'm unsure at the moment. I have an idea for something but it usually takes the prompt announcement to get an idea goin. Thank you again!

Their thirst for information must be quenched!

Thank you!

Thanks! I'm glad to hear that!

I appreciate the comment as well, thank you lots!

Oh I plan to, read my story from last jam for a bit of context on that ending. Some stuff has been made outdated with the new lore but just replace uses of God-King with Conduit and it should still work fine.

They don't want to believe that he was who ordered this massacre, but should it be confirmed, their disdain will indeed grow..

Tis the question I saught to try answering, and plan on continuing in later jams should the inspiration strike

Thank you for the feedback, will work on formatting for future tales!

I appreciate the feedback! I plan to, I am not too familiar with the novels of the legacy setting but I'm not surprised to hear the Salamanders would react in this way, which is just another reason for me to like them! I have plans for these guys, and I hope to one up this for when their story continues! Thank you again!