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OMG That is soo cool. Will you make another one?

Thanks a lot for taking the time for some feedback. Honest is the best! :)

Fair points on Originality and Looping. Wasn't so obvious for me, thus it's good to get some external input.

Glad the enjoyment was high :) I will check the parts you mentioned that you needed to read twice. :thumbs

So thanks again, and I hope we will meet again in the next Write off... dududuuuuuuu :)

So, I like the story. I can't see my final rating so I derive this from my notes:

Enjoyment: 3-4

I'm a Khorne War fan, so you got me there. Short cool snippets from the various battlefield encounters (thumbs up). The part with the weapon selection book and the glyph was not for me. It felt a little to hack & slash computer game. Maybe that was the goal? Just my opinion and personal preference here. It took me a little out of the immersion.

Originality: 3-4

Live die repeat was not so new. But to be fair, I also struggled a bit to make something matching the theme that was not derived from something.

Theme: 5

I found the repeating live, kill, die sequence captured the infinity loop very good. One question thou. In Second last part, it indicates that the demoness is in her last "weapon" cycle? Did I read that correct?

Wow thank you! The ending took some iterations to evolve.

Can you provide a PDF please? :)

Can you provide a PDF please? :)