Definitely potential here. I like the direction. Story seems interesting and renders are great. It was a bit confusing at times though. The part with the rat king was funny but I had absolutely no idea what those scenes were supposed to mean. Felt too nonsensical.
I don't know where you're going with the 2 ego's. It seems like one is gonna be submissive and the other dominant. I didn't really like how submissive the MC was being with Nyxi when I picked dominant and without the players input, it goes against femdom being avoidable. If that is the case I have to say I wouldn't really like it personally and don't think it would be fun. For people that like both it's fine but for people who like one over the other they would like half and hate the other half of the content.
With Nyxi I wanted to turn the tides with her and put her in her place and was pretty disappointed. While I do appreciate it was avoidable all I could do was just end the scene. Wanna conquer that muscle bitch Axel too. I hope we're not just shoehorned into one side depending on what ego we're playing.
But overall it's pretty good.
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That was good. A lot of sexy content. I don't really like the unavoidable lesbian bit it's for a purpose so I can let it slide. When we get to the sister we better be able to wreck her to make up for it, I don't want her thinking Katie likes her over us.
Also I don't remember her having permission to cum. So punishment is necessary.
But yeah. Shit was wicked. Good stuff.
Well, it depends on what you mean by like. Who would I like to see the MC take to pound town and put them in their place most? It's between the mom and Jessie.
But if its about who I like in general like personality wise its Addison. A cutie patootie as well as very submissive and breedable. And for me if you put a thick thighed fat assed femboy in front of me its a wrap. I'm scarfing that shit down with the quickness.
The aunt probably right behind Addison depending on how you go with her. The idea of dominating a muscle mommy is appealing. It's not done much from what I've seen.
Before I get into any criticism I want to say I like the direction and look forward to how it progresses. I like the art style and the character designs. I liked the MC being a young man. I was afraid it was gonna be a shota, not that I really hate shota’s but they’ve had it too good for too long and I like seeing male MC’s being young men or grown ass men of reasonable height. I also see that you are taking feedback pretty well even though some of them are pretty rude, I respect that. And I will say also my perspective is from someone who is only here for the dom route, I’m a sucker for a zero to hero story. But overall I look forward to the future of your project.
The first thing is the demo, the initial release. Speaking honestly it felt premature and lackluster, not really a demo more of a proof of concept. For a demo you want to give the player a taste of what’s to come, you didn’t really give us a taste we didn’t even get to see the food if I’m being honest at best we saw the menu. And kind of the problem with that is that it sets sort of a bad precedent of will the updates and patches be just as lackluster. How the demo is also does make it hard to give proper feedback because there isn’t much to work with. When we had to go into the bathroom I was expecting a scene and was disappointed when nothing happened. To remedy this I would say for the next update give us a good amount more to work with when it comes to seeing some action. Obviously I’m not saying give us the bareback pounding right of the bat or make the MC an Alpha giga sigma male or whatever but you know show us some of what we came for you know. What I think is appreciated but no one really points out is some good groping scenes: tits, ass, hips, love handles, or whatever I always appreciate a good groping. especially an ass grope where you can see the fingers sink in? Chef’s Kiss. Some light choking would be nice and would work for either sub or dom paths, even some spanking would be cool.. Anything more sexual but not penetrative are the classics handjob, titjob, assjob, thighjob maybe the rare armpitjob or even the ever elusive and seldom seen hairjob. I personally always love a nice assjob or thighjob. I’m not saying jump the shark, just give us more to work with.
Like I said I can’t give much feedback cause there's not much to go off from the demo and other people have already told you about the stuff with sharing and proper tagging so I’m not gonna repeat anything and you’ve already made changes. There were some instances where the characters said Ian instead of my chosen name so I would check that. I’m sure it’s just because it’s a demo but the text saying characters are dressed or acting a certain way and the sprite not matching it can be seen as pretty sloppy but I’m sure that will improve as you progress.
The last thing is Billy, not that he's a femboy, love me a femboy but that he has too much chest curve. You can't give him that much chest curve and call him a femboy. I think you should decrease the curve, give a slight subtle curve that's almost unnoticeable, widen his hips, and thicken his thighs a bit more too. Then you got yourself a quality femboy. I like his hair, face, clothes, and demeanor. Billy is a cutie patootie. Just that chest curve is bothering me.
Anyways, I hope my feedback gives something to work with, good luck, and I look forward to your progress.