Skip to main content

On Sale: GamesAssetsToolsTabletopComics
Indie game storeFree gamesFun gamesHorror games
Game developmentAssetsComics
SalesBundles
Jobs
TagsGame Engines

TheSeven Studios

29
Posts
2
Topics
3
Followers
5
Following
A member registered Nov 10, 2022 · View creator page →

Recent community posts

Oh you actually did it! 

Also thanks for the credit

this is so repetitive

Oh ok

How does it fit the OVERLOAD theme

There are many people who just go in jams and submit games

Lana's way of life is a game made in Unity, and that is against the rules.

I will rate it with the minimum rate possible (0 or 1) and I will comment on the game, maybe he didn't read the rules

I reported it

The engine is scratch only. Any other engine is banned.

I am a pro scratch  developer (my game is very good) but you still have good chances of being ranked second or third.

(1 edit)

By now, this is how I will rate you:

  • GRAPHICS [7/10]
    The title screen needs to be remade.
    The phones' graphics are ok. (lol Sam's sung)
  • GAMEPLAY [6/10]
    It's just a little too repetitive, try to add size-changing apples.
    The upgrades fix this problem a little because they are like "abilities".
  • MUSIC [9/10]
    The menu music is too short.
    The game's music is good.
  • IDEA [10/10]
    I like the idea, I would have never thought about that.
  • "Overload" THEME [9/10]
    You used the phones' battery percentage.

Summary: [8.2/10]

FINAL VOTE: [8/10]

(1 edit)

you just stomp black people

not you

the game is racist

Also isn't it racist or something?

Yeah it's repetitive

(3 edits)

164

Just a tip: add abilities and modifiers, because the game is repetitive and you just created a bunch of clones that change size. (Take it as a way for you to improve)

:^ )

Hope it helped you! Let me know if you want more tips! Just tell me and I'll test it!

TO ADD [IN MY OPINION]:

  • A menu screen before playing
    Helps the player to get familiar with the game's graphics.
  • A description on how it works
    Lets know the player on how to control the game and on which devices it will work.
  • Different types of enemies
    Makes a change and prevents the gameplay to be repetitive.
  • Lower jump power
    It just jumps too much.
  • Sounds and background music
    Go here on YouTube and find some music, for the sounds you can use Scratch's Sound Library.
  • Decorations on the game's itch.io page
    Will you believe it? A decorated game's page helps the game stand out from the rest of the submissions!
    Use a light style if the game has a funny atmosphere, use a darker style if the game is scary or contains horror scenes.
    Go see other games and take inspirations from their page.

I like your idea, and I'm not here to make fun of you or your game (absolutely not) (I will never do that) (please don't report me I didn't do anything wrong)

You can see my game and if you want you are free of get inspired of my style.

https://packager.turbowarp.org/

Yes, it should have exported an html file and when you open it you see your game. When you are ready to submit your project just upload that file to itch.

Search up "turbowarp packager"