If the background didn't move you would notice the offset changing so you would be able to see the player move without crossing / relaxing the eyes
TheSeven Studios
31
Posts
2
Topics
3
Followers
5
Following
A member registered Nov 10, 2022 · View creator page →
Recent community posts
Sam's sung Savior: Dodging Apple's Cancelment comments · Replied to Genjigameplays in Sam's sung Savior: Dodging Apple's Cancelment comments
Sam's sung Savior: Dodging Apple's Cancelment comments · Posted in Sam's sung Savior: Dodging Apple's Cancelment comments
By now, this is how I will rate you:
- GRAPHICS [7/10]
The title screen needs to be remade.
The phones' graphics are ok. (lol Sam's sung) - GAMEPLAY [6/10]
It's just a little too repetitive, try to add size-changing apples.
The upgrades fix this problem a little because they are like "abilities". - MUSIC [9/10]
The menu music is too short.
The game's music is good. - IDEA [10/10]
I like the idea, I would have never thought about that. - "Overload" THEME [9/10]
You used the phones' battery percentage.
Summary: [8.2/10]
FINAL VOTE: [8/10]
164
Just a tip: add abilities and modifiers, because the game is repetitive and you just created a bunch of clones that change size. (Take it as a way for you to improve)
:^ )
Hope it helped you! Let me know if you want more tips! Just tell me and I'll test it!
TO ADD [IN MY OPINION]:
- A menu screen before playing
Helps the player to get familiar with the game's graphics. - A description on how it works
Lets know the player on how to control the game and on which devices it will work. - Different types of enemies
Makes a change and prevents the gameplay to be repetitive. - Lower jump power
It just jumps too much. - Sounds and background music
Go here on YouTube and find some music, for the sounds you can use Scratch's Sound Library. - Decorations on the game's itch.io page
Will you believe it? A decorated game's page helps the game stand out from the rest of the submissions!
Use a light style if the game has a funny atmosphere, use a darker style if the game is scary or contains horror scenes.
Go see other games and take inspirations from their page.
I like your idea, and I'm not here to make fun of you or your game (absolutely not) (I will never do that) (please don't report me I didn't do anything wrong)
You can see my game and if you want you are free of get inspired of my style.