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The art for this game is rather great. Everything about the character looks fluid and eye popping right away. This is a great start to what could be an interesting game, but that's where my problem is right now, it's only a start. I really do hope you take the time to flush this out further so that there's reason for the dodge roll and hide options to exist. Also see about trying to see if you can have the action buttons in more comfortable spots. A and X are in awkward spots on the keyboard personally to play an action oriented game like this. Overall, it looks great, and with some work, it seems like it can be something special. 

This is a pretty interesting game with some good ol' "Papers Please" vibes. The game is simple enough with the basic challenge of looking at the tax form and the person in question, checking the map, then adding everything up with the tax. My main problem with this is that it is very simple. I made no mistakes as I noticed there was no time limit or anything to add pressure to the player. Though this very well could be intentional from you. Either way I enjoyed my short experience with it, and can see myself playing this for short spurts if and whenever I'm bored. 

This game is a clearly a rather personal experience to you and as a short, interactive story does very well. The abstract artwork itself doing well to help build on my imagination as the characters interacted. As a game, however, I'm not sure if there is much for me to say unfortunately, yet in the end, I did enjoy my experience with it. Keep on the good work. 

Sorry. Each page was to do with a respective room (with the occasional looking back for one or two rooms) however pages 2 and 3 got switched somewhere in the process and I didn't catch that I did that until it was to late.  All I'll say is that the third  page has the clues and the first page has the context your looking for for that room.  Hopefully that will help you. 

Thank you for the compliment. It makes me happy to know you think so highly of my game. :)

It might be my end. I'm using Chrome, but I've notice the same problem on other 3d unity browser games that have been submitted. 2d games work fine, and your front page appears as normal. It's just that the game itself doesn't seem to have any lighting whatsoever on my browser. Hmm...

Interesting and fun (and admittedly slight frustrating) concept

I'm sorry to say, but you may need to work on this a bit more. All I'm getting on the browser version of this game is a black screen with "Press 'space'" and "Quit" on it, neither of which appear to do anything. I can see green lines appear as a move my mouse around occasionally, and that your base game is there. I just am unable to see what it is that I need to see to actually play your game.