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A wonderful game. I would like to say that the story is in the foreground and not the sex and due to the good translation it is very good for my taste so far. I haven't played it through yet. Keep up the good work and more of it. I gladly accept such recommendations.

Would it be possible to make a demo version available first instead of immediately launching a paid version?

Thank you very much. I didn't know the expression yet. Learned something new again. Thank you

It says free everywhere, but in reality you have to pay at least 9.90 USD.

I wish you all a Merry Christmas too

I wish you all a Merry Christmas too

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I haven't played through it yet.

I'm only on chapter 5 but I have to make an interim statement.

The game is actually good.

It's just what's bothering me at the moment. The story is becoming illogical. At least in the ratio of masters to slaves.

I'm writing a statement now because it's still fresh in my mind.

For me as a non-English speaker who sometimes has to translate with my cell phone, it's even more difficult to understand.

A master takes control, responsibility and care of the slave.

But this is totally neglected.
The slave is not allowed to talk but is supposed to look after himself ?

That's where the story suddenly goes into the strange area.

This becomes very clear in the behavior between Marie and her mother.

Marie behaves wrongly towards the slave.

Instead of telling the slave that he should take better care of himself, he needs to be built up.

After all, he acted correctly. ( Duty of care of the master and wrong behavior of the mother )

In my understanding there is a fine line between sexual dominance and breaking someone.

After all, the wife knows why he wanted to become a slave.

The reward is sexual relief. The game only continues later with punishments.

The slave is also broken by the woman's new relationship.

This means that all of the slave's wishes to be a slave are extinguished.

So the slave would have actually given up and taken the chance of death by electricity.

Why would he still want to live?

A normal life will never come again.

He has been broken. His wife is also newly taken.

The sexual thrill is also gone. ( Hasn't been there for a long time )

The game consists only of Maso (not his case, as he explained at the beginning of the game).

That's why I rate the game up to chapter 5 out of a maximum possible 5 points ( because 10 is simply too much space. People only differentiate between good, bad and well. Everything in between is statistics )

Story 3/5

BDSM variety 4/5

Sex 3/5 ( because of eternally repetitive licking scenes and few sperm scenes )

This is just my opinion. I have no BDSM experience myself. Nevertheless, I give the game a total of 5 stars as a good night's reading.

a really great game. please keep it up

What Veronica did at an alternative ending is true torture for me.

punishing others for something without the knowledge or involvement of the perpetrator\recipient.

my nerves are already on edge because of the injustice.

More of this please.

But I couldn't activate at least one path.

I could not activate pictures 9-12, 15-16, 19-20 in the Gallery.

There are also no selection sequences from the father's confession which I had not tried or is the decision made even earlier ?

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The story was not mine but still full marks

I think it was very well realized.

For my taste, the acts could have been made more romantic and even more visually sensual.

It was visually too much, in, out and I'm done and now it's over.

But that's a matter of taste.

I rate the version 0.39 version that I purchased at the same time.

Very nicely done. Keep up the good work.

Something different. The only thing I didn't like were the mosaic windows in the game despite the password.

That is very nice.

I would suggest offering more recent updates for sale as well.

The background is. The gaming world is unfortunately short-lived. Interest in a game can be short-lived.

What a player finds interesting today may no longer interest them next month. That's revenue you can take with you as a developer.

I have one more comment about the game.

Maybe you should rethink the animation speed during training or even make it adjustable in the options.

I think 75% would be enough. A speed that is too fast looks funny and a slower speed can look more erotic.

Depending on what purpose you want to fulfill.

Anyway, I would like to thank you for the nice conversation.

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before I write a bad review.

What is the mistake please that it doesn't go on from woman no.3.

either this is just a demo or it wasn't finished.

otherwise well done until then. i like it much better than the 2nd part.

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It does not concern the demo but the latest sales version 6.4 here.

How about they split your bundle of 10 years ?

What is the customer interested in ?

The customer may only be interested in this game.

Just offer finished levels or extras individually to the masses.

For a fee, of course. Depending on the effort and background of the creation, the price should then be flexible.

Example:
A private programmer who creates something like this is happy about every bonus payment because it is his hobby. He does not live from his hobby.
Then I would release a good playable demo for free

Sell the finished version and then maybe charge €5 per version for each further upgrade.

If it's not his hobby and he has to make a living from it, then maybe €10 per version because of taxes etc.

Depending on how much you sell, you can see how popular it is and whether you can put more work into the project.

For people who enjoy all your projects, the membership is ideal

I would also not set the division in the membership with 2 versions behind it,

but rather make it playable 2 weeks before release.

You always have to remember that you are not giving any guarantees. You don't promise a new version every month

and so I would have to pay 30€ per version for this game and if a new version takes 3 months then that would be 90€ for me.

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error 2: also occurs later in the game on the other levels. There must be a jump mark that always jumps to the respective boss in the level.

What I find very annoying is that the update window keeps popping up. Yes, there are updates, which I think is great, but I don't have €30 a month to afford another level for the game and another membership doesn't allow me to do any more levels because of the 2 level limit and the fact that this game isn't included in the smaller subscriptions.

I have the feeling that the higher my level, the more often the window appears.

Since the test assignment doesn't work as described in the readme file in the appendix, the constant clicking gets really annoying in the long run.

I have the feeling that the description is a mix between renpy and UnityPlayer.

The other languages described on the homepage don't exist either.

This gives the impression that the demo is already in 4 languages. Here at itch.io it is described that it is only available in version 7 or later in these languages, which you cannot buy here.

The website and the readme file also tell you that this game runs on HTML 5.

I hope I was able to convey enough errors and my own impressions and you are not angry with me for that.

If something comes across as nasty, then that was not my intention and could be due to the translation.

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Error 1: When I want to go to Doc Hypno, I am shown the scene with the guards and then the picture remains gray. It does not go any further.
Error 2: During lip training ( Suck Face 50 % ) there is often a short jump to the foot scene after Poison Ivy.

I am using the 0.6.4 - Win - Episode 1-6 version

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Unfortunately, I've had some bad luck with Patreon in the past, where I contributed to the development but the finished product was later sold on Steam. Note: German users do not have access to Steam Adult and were left empty-handed.

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A great game which is very text-heavy but very nice. (I can't speak English very well) The Yuri finale was so beautiful that it almost brought tears to my eyes. Please keep it up. Nevertheless, I have the feeling that it is a censored version. The game always talks about an uncensored Patreon version. But I couldn't find any other version on the Patreon page. Are there any differences?

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The game is funny and yet very hard-hitting.

Keep up the good work. I would only wish that the student in fishnet stockings would also be punished in the tournament, or why did she get away with it and was still allowed to keep her tights on without being punished? She resisted and even got away with it. That doesn't fit in with the game at the end. Otherwise, keep up the good work. I'm already looking forward to a sequel.