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I love th Seafoam Giant, such a cool idea! I also enjoy nautical themes, so you got me there. Iwould have liked a map of some sort, to see at a glance how the locations relate to each other. Still, would love to play through this adventure!

Saving the elders daughter felt a little to uninspired, I did like leaning into the title and making a Bat God. Would have loved a more Shadowdark-y layout to give it the feel. Love, love, LOVE the library!

I think a gauntlet is such a good idea for the Devil cover. I am a bit of a Shadowdark newbie, I would have like one more page to give a bit more space to the backstory, maybe include a map? It is short, which is good at a table, but for me, personally, it feels a bit to short. Really cool corruption table!

I love the idea of an Oni as the final boss, but I was disappointed you didn't twist the damsel in distress into something more. I think you could tell a more modern story evenwith these old covers as inpso. I do think the dungeon is interesting, I love the attacking flowers right at the start ^^ stellar layout. Nice maps!