Hi
i loved it!
the letter, my final bad ending (day94 i think), the hardships of growing and getting some things...
I would definitely use it to present the Vtm.
There are 4 things i missed if you think about making the game grow:
_being able to save or have some old fasion checkpoint codes: i took it seriously and it lasted long, and i intend on trying to reach other endings. That would really be a plus.
_i was not offered to grow more malkavian powers like obsuscate wich i love. And maybe we could be offered a hint about these powers or all the things the patrons can offer us, because it can take a long time. But i really liked the inteaction and time of deals they broke with me.
_it is a bit too easy to kill . I would like a way to not let go if i take "just a little more" , even if i pay it by some malus on my die, or more hunger. botching is one thing, but killng even with precautions is not ok. i still havent figured if i kill because i'm at 4 hunger, or if the victim is weaker.
_and i would love some lines about our beast; or moments where we antagonise; all the more if it is specific to our character or blood, like the scenes in the LA by night show.