velvet is not a child they are just small also considering that every other bit of vore was endo, it could just as easily be seen as him just being dragged off "team rocket is blasting off again" style. it's kept ambiguous for the enjoyment of the reader - so you can enjoy the other interpretation of what happens :)
While I don't hate the concept, I think the font choice hinders it a little - it can be frustrating getting time penalties because it was difficult to read sometimes when a letter was actually in caps or not.
The art and gameplay are cute. My main complaint is about knowing when something is happening. Sometimes it's difficult to see that someone said something if you're scrolled to a completely different part of the screen. I have no idea how much dialogue I missed.
This is far better than it has any right to be in the time frame you were given. Can I have the name of your witch coven you used? I want that kind of black magic. (edit: this is sarcasm, since it doesn't read well in text. I don't think you used black magic. Unless you did which hey, cool- but seriously, very good game)
