Good games are defined by their ability to capture the player in an enthralling role- your game though simple feels like it does just that. A mystery followed by learning thru context clues, an ambiance that grows impatient once the conflict is revealed, and all this paired with great artistic atmosphere and a text that compliments it like pages of a book. I really enjoyed this visual novel!
I played your game (and a couple others) and left feedback on the game in the video below.