Impressive start. The writing is very good, succeeds at painting a good picture of characters, locations and situations alike. I like the delightful clash  of mythology/history with lewd passions and desires.  There is a lot of substance to the story, which is a rare find in this day and age. ;) 

I am looking forward to see what the dev will come up with in terms of visuals. In some cases, they are very much needed, because I am not really familiar with all the animals I've met in the introduction alone. But I am very much intrigued to learn more and will enjoy another helping of the worldbuilding that really sets this work apart from many other projects.

Thanks for the comments :) In terms of visuals, you can get a good idea of what to expect by looking at my character artist’s FurAffinity page (warning, very NSFW): https://www.furaffinity.net/user/tanutanuki/

She has a distinct style which includes strong outlines that really make the characters pop. I am planning to make the final backgrounds relatively soft, bordering on out-of-focus, to make the spritework really stand out when superimposed. She’s currently in the process of designing all the characters–you can see one example, the main character, under my screenshots–and once those are all finalised, work on the sprites will begin. I’ll be sure to add additional character designs to itch as they become publicly available :)