Just finished this first build and while I don't think it was by any means perfect, I do feel that this game as a whole has a lot of potential.  I hope I'm not being too forward by asking this but, could I make some suggested additions/changes that I feel would really allow this game to reach its future potential?

Dude....thats a comment section / topic section. Sure ur allowed to suggest things here...ur allowed to say ur oppinion. So why are u asking...

Thanks for playing! Please feel free to share your thoughts!

OMG This visual novel looks great, I really enjoyed the content out there right now, and God didn't spend even 2 minutes to meet Iroko and I already fell in love with him, I think I have a soft spot for hyenas. Really excellent work, I will be looking forward to the next update. Greetings.

Well I love the character models so far, but it could be nice to have the occasional scene image

Might be a bit weird but the description made me feel it's one of those short finished games. Specifically the " FEATURES" part.

"Full character artwork" is not needed, as we can see the images while browsing.

"Numerous choices to make" makes it feel as if you're trying to boastfuly advertise, so i'd turn that into "Choices have consequences" for example.

I say note how often you'll do content updates to draw people in, because I only got a clue it's not a finished game because the build file name is 0.1 and not 1.0.

The promo image should also probably include the cute hyena if he's the selling point :p

Also you might want to answer if the game will feature sex scenes because i'm surprised nobody asked yet

Lastly, i failed to see what kind of game this is, reading gave me vague points like: secrets, superpowers, alien mystery.

The questions i'm asking myself are: can i date the hyena? Is this game sfw? Is it on a monthly update schedule? will main character get those "incredible powers"? Is it like one of those anime battle shounens like naruto?

Might post more after i play.

Hi.

Really enjoyed that first episode. Great job.

So nice to have a VN set where I live and not another generic Isekai.

Spotted two spelling mistakes.

Spelled Leicester (Leicaster) wrong in the tube scene.

In Ethans bedsit spelled pretty as prety.

I kinda hope there are no sex scenes, romance is cuter.... 

Looking forward to more.

Ok i'm hooked! I binged it in like an hour or two lol. When i wondered if it's like a battle shounen it was just wishful thinking but the game actually has main character with super powers fighting monsters! 

I think it looks great :3

why is it that the 2d portrait of ethan when he smiles, he kind of looks like a person we meet at a train station who is a creepy pervert stalker kind of guy. but meh the story was still great overall, when I was playing the game and knew what aesops are they gave me it reminded me of some dark mahou shoujo animes(madoka, mahou shoujo site) 😂😂😂