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The Sun King's Palace

A fully digital dungeon built in Twine and runnable at your table. · By snow

Spelling Mistakes [Master Thread]

A topic by snow created Dec 20, 2021 Views: 254 Replies: 7
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Developer(+1)

YOU DO NOT HAVE TO but if you are one of those folks that cannot help but notice and point out spelling errors, feel free to put them here. One of the first goals of funding for this project is to hire an editor.

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Hey there Batts, glad to check in every once in a while.  Current ones I found are:
Under "Some Advice", in "Ignore the Stats" there's a misspelling of Everything as "Everying"
In the fourth paragraph of "The myth goes..." in the timeline there's "jem" instead of gem
In the fifth paragraph of "The myth goes..." in the timeline there's "firey" instead of fiery
Under King's Guard in the Bestiary there's  "extraordinair" instead of extraordinaire for Tsioh

These are all I could find without diving into the Bestiary! Will do that on my lunch break

Developer(+1)

Fixed!

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Oh found some more I overlooked. Under Ignore the Stats there's also "charicatures" instead of caricatures
In the content warnings there's "suffereing" instead of suffering

In "Entrances" the Krillin quote in the first paragraph has "their" instead of there

In the same section under "Wrong Warp" there's "damanged" instead of damaged

In "Procedures" under "Stain" there's "think" instead of thing
 Alright now I got everything aside from Individual Creatures and Room entries!

Developer(+1)

Fixed!

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So now here's an attempt for the rooms:
Format is: Room (Number): "spelling mistake" corrected word

Room 1: "sihilouettes" silhouettes

Room 2: "human-eqsue" human-esque

Room 3: "mightist" mightiest

Room 6: "barrells" barrels; "flamable" flammable

Room 10: "alion" alien

Room 11: "granfather" grandfather

Room 12: "twisth" twist

Room 16: "non-rhtyhm" non-rhythm

Room 18: "Retrun" Return

Room 21: "Retrun" Return

Room 22: "iconagraphy" iconography; "Retrun" Return

Room 24: "Retrun" Return

Room 25: "Retrun" Return

Room 26: "Retrun" Return

Room 27: "faught" fought; "Retrun" Return

Room 28: "Retrun" Return

Room 29: "Retrun" Return

Room 30: "Retrun" Return

Okay you see the picture. The rest of the Mausoleum is filled with the Retrun spelling error, so I'm going to disregard those until they come up again after the Mausoleum.

Room 36: "nairs" nails

Room 38: "treasuer" treasure

Treasury: I'm not sure if "vineful" is a word so I'm just mentioning it here; "every since" ever since

Room 42+43: "aarokocra" I think it's aarakocra . Also both rooms have the same description

Room 50: Repetition of room 42+43

Room 54: "Retrun" Return

I'm now taking a break for lunch but after that I'll look over the next 40 rooms and the Bestiary!


Developer(+1)

Fixed!

Back again with the typos!

The Abyss section: "packs" pacts

Room 57: "transluscent" translucent

The Throne: "Motzart's" Mozart's

Room 94: "Oblisks" Obelisks

And that concludes the rooms! Moving onto the bestiary sometime tomorrow