Hey, if you're one of those people who loves to tell me how bad at spelling I am (which is very bad) you can post here. I am not asking for free work from y'all, but I know some of you are hardwired to do it so feel free to dump it here.
Just started reading it, it seems very sick. Here's some edit things I've found.
Page 10. "Masive Damage:" instead of massive.
Pages 30+. Footer says Snow Hack where it should say Songbirds
And, finally a weird one. There seems to be remnants of two different combat systems in a couple instances. Volf Knight (p.19) and Berserker (p.15) both reference adding things to attack rolls. On the equipment page (p.32) it shows the modifiers for an attack roll. However, in the actual combat rules (p.96), it implies to only roll a d20 to see if you crit (though it says "just roll damage" suggesting you don't roll a d20 at all). Monsters follow this convention and don't have an attack bonus.
I KNEW I was forgetting something. I was in such a mad dash today.
I've fixed the mixups with AC/attack rolls/dodge rolls. It'll still take some fiddling still moving forward, but I really appreciate/like how mork borg/cy_borg does it with flat to-hit DCs. This has gone through lots of iterations (as you can see) so thanks for noticing and picking at it.
current version.
p. 34, Armor: “When armor runs out it is destroyed and needs <to be> repaired or replaced”.
p. 40, the Soda list.
p. 71, travel encounter list says “AVALANCE” instead of AVALANCHE
in Red, the first line of “Skills” is repeated – “The skills necessary to be a songbird. All of them exist inside eachThe skills necessary to be a songbird. All of them exist inside each songbird,”
and in both versions the 40th soda says “Was Once Was” but i’m guessing it’s supposed to be What Once Was?
not necessarily spelling but troubleshooting i guess!