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Asking for More Feedback for my 2 games.

A topic by Start From Cero created Jun 27, 2023 Views: 343 Replies: 8
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Pretty self-explanatory. Just looking for more feedback and opinions on my two titles, Constricted & Gift From A Roi. 

Constricted by Start From Cero (itch.io)

Gift From A Roi by Start From Cero (itch.io)

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Playing these :)

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I liked them! Constricted was made in only 14 hours which is impressive, but it’s also the one that could use an update if you wanted to. It’d be cool if you could see the body you pull out of the closet, maybe in a fertilizer bag. I also notice the drawer and the 2 closets always loop the same actions. It’d be nice to have a text when things are empty. A restart button would be nice.

I'm contemplating possibly remaking it down the road. Either that or creating a spiritual successor, with similar gameplay elements, but with more polish and a new spin on the idea. 

that would be awesome!

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I very much enjoyed these. One short and sweet, one elaborate with a gripping narrative! I think I like Constricted the best because of how concise and hilarious it is. It reminds me of my own game, if you'd like to give it a shot: https://wasabiiii.itch.io/grass-elemental-demo-demo

Great work!

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Wasabis demo is great, everyone should try it. Anyhow, I will give your games a look! Would love if you do the same for me. 

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i really like the spriting, but the movement speed is a little bit slow, which detracts from the experience. Additionally, you might consider having the player character move full squares instead of half squares.

I made the movement speed slow after getting kidnapped to emphasize the player waking up and feeling off balance. But I agree in regard to the speed. In retrospect it is a little too slow even for my liking.