Please report any bugs and typos here so I can fix them.
Erotic RPG. Hunt monsters and search for the Black Demon Beast. · By
Thank you again!
Fixed everything except the "I thrust my cock balls deep inside and" since
"I thrust my cock and balls deep inside and" makes it sound like he's thrusting his balls inside too.
"I thrust my cock, balls deep, inside and" Sounds okay to me too, but if you think the phrase itself sounds odd or confusing I'll consider changing it to something completely different.
Ahhh, for some reason I was reading that as "cock balls", haha. I like your second example better than what I had put but now that I'm reading it differently it makes a lot more sense. It's highly possible I might be mistaken with some of these screenshots so I won't take any offense if you keep things as they are :)
Anyways, last batch for today, I promise. I've been powering through the game on a mission to 100% it. I played the Japanese version but given that I can't read or speak Japanese there was only so much I could accomplish, so it's a much more enjoyable experience this time around!
Hahaha yeah "cock balls" does sound pretty odd. And don't worry, I don't think you're mistaken and I really appreciate telling me all the typos and giving me your opinion. If there's something I don't want to change right away, like this time, I'll explain it so I can get some feedback and improve the quality of the translation.
I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the game and thank you for letting me know about all these typos!
I'll fix them and give a more detailed reply later today or tomorrow, thanks again for all the feedback!
Last round! I believe I have completed everything, all scenes / CG and bestiary unlocked and I went through the alternate ending. Great game and great localization, after the art I feel like the pacing is the second best part of this game. Rarely did I find myself grinding without any new scenes either 1) able to be unlocked or 2) imminent as I progressed.
The art is amazing though, there are a lot of great artists but illustrators who are both skilled and have a distinct style that you can immediately recognize are far more rare. Top notch stuff!
Again, great work and great choice of a game to localize. I hope it proves to be a success for you and I look forward to seeing more from HappyHand!
Thank you again and sorry for the late reply! Fixing the typos is a no-brainer, but here's what I think of the other things you mentioned.
A.And it was inevitable. I cum. I just cum unsightly.
B.And it was inevitable. I came.
I came so shamefully.
A.I get horny right away and tonight too, (context?)
B.As expected, he's way more skilled now
since it's his second time doing this.
I get horny right away and, tonight too,
when Ike-san milks me with his whole body,
I orgasm while spilling milk out
A.[Cow]
B.[cow] *If that's what you meant, neither has heard a cow before and the [] are there to empathize the word.
A.spilled out his grudges(?)
B.spilled out his... grudges? *It was like A in Japanese, she's just stating what he did while questioning if what he did was just because of his grudges towards her. B works(?) too.
A.Being roughly fucked from behind feels
especially "I'm being used like an object"
and it's so amazing.
B.Being roughly fucked from behind feels
particularly "I'm being used like an object"
and it makes me so ecstatic.
C.Being roughly fucked from behind feels
like I'm being used like as an object and
it's so amazing.
D.Being roughly fucked from behind makes me
feel like I'm being used like an object and
it makes me so ecstatic. *I like D the most but, if you think it's terrible then feel free to let me know!
A.beat the cock...
B.beat the cock... *It's a meme/joke. There's just this joke of saying "can't beat the cock" since it's a saying, staple in Japanese adult games/doujins, when girls just can't win against it resulting them or other people saying that "Yup, no one can beat the cock" or "I couldn't beat the cock..." or "I couldn't win against the cock..." and so on. In Japanese he does say "she can't even beat cock", but there's no plural for it so it's either "can't even beat a cock" or "can't even beat cocks" and it uses the specific phrase that's used for "can't beat the cock" so I decided to go with that. If you still think it's silly/wrong then I guess I could change it.
If I missed anything please let me know and I'll reply back!
Congrats on finishing the game and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it! Yeah, when I saw the game the first time I fell in love with the art style instantly. I just HAD TO make this the first game I publish. Thank you and I hope everyone will enjoy it as much as you did! Thank you very much for all the help again, feel free to ask me if there's anything on your mind, cheers!
Hey no problem and thank you for the reply! Also I forgot to ask about this:
A."I didn't talk with you so I could order something!!!"
"You get that right, since
you've lived so pointlessly long!!"
B."I didn't talk with you so I could order something!!!"
"You got that, right, since
you've lived so pointlessly long!!"
*You got that right, just sounds odd to me because the way she says it, you get that, right?
*You get that right, just sounds odd to me because the way she says it, you got that, right?
*Like that, but if I'm wrong or you think got is better please let me know!
I'm glad the rest looked good and I changed the like to as , but man maybe I should look for an editor since there was quite a lot of errors, in my opinion anyway.
Thank you for going through the trouble of reporting all this to me! I really appreciate it and feel free to ask if there's anything I can do in return or if you have any questions!
Hi,
Not terribly sure if this is intended or not, but to upgrade the Hungry Wolf Sword to it's S form, I need to already have the S form itself? I don't know if this is just mistranslated, me not reading correctly, etc. etc., but I figure I would post about it here.
Hey,
I ran into an issue after the blacksmith second scene where it seemed there was a tile glitch and the floor was completely missing in my room. i was still able to move around and interact with things so i figured leaving the room would resolve the issue. However when I entered the bar area another glitch arose where it look like Sary's sprite replaced all the floor tiles. Once again though i could interact with everything so I figured why not roll the dice again and grab some missions and head out to see if it will resolve itself...A little back story about myself. Since i was a young boy I always had this terrible habit of playing games for hours on end just grinding my way to a high level just so I could one shot everything that crossed my path. All the while saving up gold and collecting every weapon and armor piece I could get my greedy little fingers on. Now here is where I reveal to you my greatest shame, I never save. My life has been fraught with power outages and game breaking glitches on more occasions than I like to remember. Countless hours have been lost in which I have achieved greatness only to have it slip from my fingers because I am a fool who learns nothing from traumatic past experience. Just moments ago I once again tasted this bitter end which has plagued my whole existence. It is here my story continues... I head out to do the missions at the volcano and the game crashed. I realized i hadnt saved once then cried in the fetal position for a brief amount of time and then wrote this.
Anyway the point of my above tale is wondering how difficult would it be to add an autosave function. Im not a programmer in any respect of the word but I feel like autosave should be implemented in games for people like me...also i wish i had saved so i could provide you with more information about the glitch i encountered so no one else has to suffer the pain im currently feeling.
I hope none of this came accross negatively. I really enjoyed your game and plan to start over once my heart has healed. Hopefully I remember to save next time.
