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πŸ”₯ I'm wondering if there's any things that make my pages hard to read or navigate πŸ”₯

A topic by Pizza Doggy created 45 days ago Views: 201 Replies: 7
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Hi. I'd like to know your opinion on the layouts, graphics and the choices of fonts for my pages. I'm hoping to make my pages easy to use, and wondering if there's any things that make them hard to read, navigate or anything else.

 Anything that comes to mind is great, you don't have to be an expert in design and stuff, haha :)


In return I can give you feedback on something too, if you like :)

https://pizzadoggy.itch.io/


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hmm maybe add some pizza or a dog or smthn to fit your name more. and if u want you can play my game here https://sleepyhollow-games.itch.io/beyond (and leave a comment)

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Your page looks great.  

More detailed feedback: The icon with Echoes and the white van stand out because it's light against brown. Everything else blends because it's the same colour. I find the orange a bit hard to read, but I can still read it. The prices are squashed and hard to read, which probably doesn't matter.

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Good points :) It's a great help that you pointed them out, because I didn't pay enough attention to it. Thank you for your time! :)

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πŸ‘‹ Hi, 

Some stuffs:

  • The text font at the top of the page felt a bit too small for me.
  • When I was scrolling on the page, the background was a bit distracting. Maybe adding some opacity would help?
  • Also, Echoes stands out quite a bit.

Here is my game : https://agapanthestudio.itch.io/openhatch
Feedback appreciated πŸŽ‰

Hi! Thanks for great feedback. I've made the changes you have suggested, as they seem to be very true. I'll just need to figure out something about the background, to make it less distractive, as changing the transparency isn't an option. Thanks again, for taking your time. Best of luck to you, take care! :)

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Pretty πŸ”₯

I love the use of the custom CSS.

Some tiny nitpicks:

  • The images could be optimized. The 2 bundle image buttons is displayed at ~300px width, but the actual file is 624px, twice the size as needed. Resizing the images and the bg could helps loading time a little.

  • The links at the top could use inline-block in the custom CSS. So that it won’t break awkwardly in the middle on smaller screens.

    Before:

    After inline-block:

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Thank you very much! This is a great help, as I'm not very familiar with the CSS, haha