Heyho! 

So for the feedback on your Itch Page...my personal opinion is that everything looks fine. :)

Perhaps you should add some additional screenshots and a little sneak peak gameplay vid. 

Since there is nothing playable at the moment, there isn't much to say. x) 

Keep up your good work!

It's a solid looking page, very pretty. 

I really like the page as well. The first couple sentences really made me excited about the game seeing as I am a massive Harry Potter fan. Really good page and I wish you the best of luck!