I had NOT played yours. Really a cool game. I love the cell shading style (despite there being no color haha) and the intro sequence in the characters quarters to gather information before entering the heavy gameplay reminded me of Rollerdrome.

I enjoyed the gameplay as well. Though I do think it could use a bit more tuning. Speed in particular.

That said, Incredible entry for a jam of this length. Had I played it, it would have been in the top 10, but I can only play so many.

Thanks

I hadn't played this on either. I liked it a lot. The animations are nice, the sounds are crunch, but could use a little level balancing.

Beyond that, I liked the in game tutorial, which is always welcome, and frequently forgotten. 

Point of personal preference is the camera. It's very restricted, which I understand is part of the intent, but with platformers I prefer a bit more scope. 

My Only real critique is the physics tuning. The play feels, if not unfair, at least unbalanced. For example when your jump gets strong enough it almost stops being a benefit and starts being a problem.

But all that can be worked out if you choose to keep working on it. The bones of the game are great.

Thanks!