Play FIST
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| STYLE | #13 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
| Overall | #16 | 3.188 | 3.188 |
| SUBSTANCE | #17 | 2.875 | 2.875 |
Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I really think there's great potential in this, just needs to be honed in. Took a while to understand what this was but you still did a great job!
Some cool new traits and a new role and enough hints of what is going on to serve as inspiration for missions. The thumbnail though looks very similar to Big Brother in 1984, I would consider changing it to a more demonic eye perhaps, as I was expecting something Orwellian before I read the doc. I would also consider offering a portrait orientation for the content, which the current looks nice on my monitor if people want to print it then it might be a bit odd compared with most other TTRPG content
Three TRAITS and one new ROLE with demonic vibes. All of them could easily slot in against any of the core FIST material.
With a title like “Federal Bureau of Infernal Affairs,” I was expecting to see some info on a demon-focused faction (e.g., a cabal of demons in competition to win the most souls, a secret government organization working to purge demonic influence). While that’s not present in the document, you could use this material as a starting point to build your own.
I realized that my original comment won't show up on the non-jam project page, so I'm going to repost it there so it will be a public endorsement.
Fixed!
Be aware, your submission isn't accessible from this page or your project page. Did you upload the file(s) and make sure they're marked as available for download?thanks so much for bringing this to my attention it turns out yes, i did forget to upload files but its all good now