It's a little rough around the edges but I still really like this track, I think the raw nature of it contributes to the spookiness in a good way! 

Definitely feels like something I'd hear in an indie horror game and think was a good soundtrack.

The ghostly choir part that comes in halfway through I particular enjoy.

That's cool, the tension of a sighting is there. The switch that happens at exactly 1:00 is really powerful (an making it happen exactly at 1:00 makes it more satisfying :D). It's a fun take on the theme, surprising but you can't say it doesn't fit! I think it would have been really cool if the track ended in suspension, maybe at a climax, with the unresolved tension. But it still works great!

for a crunched jam, this still sounds great! The drums give this whole thing so much intensity. And I like that you went with a spooky theme rather than something chill. :) There must be a ghost girl I am sure!!

I think we all crunched and are dissatisfied with the result, so don't worry about it too much. I like the arrangement and the ambient textures you've created to create that feeling of uneasiness and unresting-mood, but I feel like it might be a tad too intense for the image (I imagine a dark dungeon, an underground cave, a boss level, something in these "waters"), even though there is indeed a ghost creeping up on the photo !