Overall, one of the better entries of the jam. Definitely larger in scope befitting and month-long jam. I recommend it.

• Use of Theme - 4
  • Involves both physical and mental recovery themes.
• Gameplay - 4 [SPOILERS]
  • I'm not a huge fan on visual novels TBH. But this kept me going to the end.
  • I thought there might be some puzzles given the calendar entries - but it seemed to all play out without needing the information
  • The main character and Laura character portraits were strange - I started thinking you were trying to do a split personality thing but wasn't convinced
  • The Laura conversation dialogue fit in-game thematically but limited the text so lot's of abbreviations and stuff that made me think she was half brain-dead - which opposes the story-line that she could be ascending
• Creativity - 4
  • Good job on trying something unique and interesting
• Art & Sound - 4
  • Both added value to the game

• Use of Theme - 4
  • At first i thought that the game didn't have much to do with the theme other than the mission to recover Laura's body. But after reaching the end i understood what you went for and i liked it. Not the most alusive but it worked.
• Gameplay - 4
  • The game was well done, it was engaging, fun and kept it interesting through constant changes of scenarios and objectives, which i find can make or break a game like this one. Only one thing i did not understand was the different portraits in the messages when the character or the "narrator" was speaking. The portraits were really blurry, maybe intentionally, idk if we are supposed to figure out what they represent but i couldn't.
• Creativity - 5
  • The story was very well written, as well as the characters and the different storylines (i played it twice). So good job on that end.
• Art - 4
  • I think the art was all very homogenous which made the game very immersive, it was not the prettiest game but it conveyed the message and that's what matters.
• Sound - 4
  • The sound was good, i appreciated the changes in the BGM everytime the mood shifted.

I had a lot of fun playing the game. I love the story and the decisions. If I find the time, I will play it again with another ending. 

The only thing I can think of that would make the game better would be voiceovers, but you can't expect that from a solo developer.

Great job.

I really enjoyed this visual novel. I don't think it fit the theme to incredibly well, but I found the story and overall feel of the game to be really enjoyable. I enjoyed the humor scattered throughout the narrator at the SFX were extremely well done. The SFX really made the world feel alive and lived in. Great jop!