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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Presentation | #7 | 3.917 | 4.091 |
| Concept | #8 | 3.569 | 3.727 |
| Overall | #11 | 3.373 | 3.523 |
| Use of the Limitation | #15 | 3.046 | 3.182 |
| Enjoyment | #23 | 2.959 | 3.091 |
Ranked from 11 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Team members
one
Software used
gamemaker
Use of the limitation
yeah! its set in the afterlife
Cookies eaten
like a fair few actually (genuinely)
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definitely one of the most interesting concepts from this jam. I like the subtle exploration of personal morals. its definitely a theme i'd like to see more of.
the art style is insanely eyecatching and really sets it apart from other submissions. Your writing is quite good too and the dialogue feels well put together.
the possibility of choices in dialogue trees would be nice to see, so that the story feels more personal and the player can take a more unique approach to how they want to interact with each monster.
I personally chose Sea, As based on Fogs dialogue , if i chose them i would only hurt them, they didn't mind that I would hurt them but it was clear they missed what they were before people moved in. So i chose sea so that fog wouldn't get any worse just so i could stay with "what i already knew" and instead chose to try something new with sea.
maybe im looking into it a bit too deep. but altogether i loved this project <3
Oh thanks for this comment!! its v nice
I think im definitely going to try dialog trees if i make something like this again also yeah i was curious if people would choose Sea to try and help Fog, if i had more time i think i wouldve explored that more.
It was definitely a really good game, I just felt that the dialog was a bit much and the controls felt sloppy. Other than that, I loved it!
thanks!! if you want could you tell me if a bit much means i wrote too much dialog or if the dialog was melodramatic, either way ill keep it in mind for next time
By "a bit much" I meant it was too much dialog. Thank you for taking my criticism into thought, though:)!
This is great, I love the design of the island and I found it interesting how one of them had animate pronouns and one had inanimate pronouns.
Loved the art style! The text still needs a bit of polish like some words don't have a space between them though. I played twice to get both endings. Also enjoyed the atmospheric vibe and music!
Thanks!!! also ty for telling me about the text issues ill try to fix them at some point
I'm fan of the art, and I found the writting very good, nice work :)
thanks! im glad you liked the writing im still pretty new at it
Really immersive and well polished visual novel. The art is also awesome.
aaaa thank you!!