I also liked the idea and the artsyle. I just found some bug which made the game restart as soon as the line appears ~70% of the times so it was kinda annoying to wait for some try to play.
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Broken Line's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Presentation | #1 | 4.133 | 4.133 |
| Use of the Limitation | #1 | 4.267 | 4.267 |
| Overall | #3 | 3.867 | 3.867 |
| Concept | #7 | 3.800 | 3.800 |
| Enjoyment | #7 | 3.267 | 3.267 |
Ranked from 15 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Team members
ART: Juan Pablo Posada Noreña, Santiago Díaz Ospina CODING: Miguel Ángel Hoyos Ramírez, Camilo García Arango MUSIC/SFX: Juan José Ospina Ortega
Software used
Unity, Photoshop, Audacity
Use of the limitation
The game is narrated in just one room, where the protagonist tells his story and his descend into madness
Cookies eaten
14
Comments
This is something very special. Seriously, well done! Amazing little game with fantastic presentation and a story as gripping as it is unsettling. Well done to all involved on this project!
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Paper Chaseri really enjoyed the ambience in this game, overall the game play was well executed, great work
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Action Jackson PollockThis is AMAZING. The art and the music and the sounds and the atmosphere are just amazing, I love this to bits!!! Oh my gosh!
This hit a very sensitive spot for me too, as someone who struggles with extreme anxiety and a lot of derealization/depersonalization, and I actually had to pause and take a moment to breathe halfway through the game because of the effect it had on me. This is seriously awesome, definitely my favorite of all the submissions here, this is amazing!
This is an awesome take on the theme and the limitation, and I absolutely adored all the levels! They were really fun to play through! One thing though, several times when the levels reloaded I'd lose immediately before even being able to move, is that a glitch or is there a timer? Anyhow, I love them, al the levels looked so good and were really fun to play through!
Also, the atmosphere really gave me chills. The whispers and the crying had me really anxious all the time and the story made me really emotional.
This is amazing and I love it, everyone did an awesome job on it!
OH MY GOD!! I just one thing to say WHAT A MASTERPIECE!
I tried 26 games at this point and this is definitely the best one! Everything is perfect :
The sound design is so scary and well designed, The art is just awesome and those "levels" are very well designed!
No need to talk about the concept, if someone didn't tried it yet, just go for it!! the story is simple but awesome! Maybe the gameplay is not enough intuitive because you just need to "survive" and not reach a specific point.. but it's very original!
I just want to say THANK YOU to this insane team and keep doing masterpiece like this one! (I instant follow lol).
And one last thing : Is the main art a jojo reference? hehe
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Enlighten's FateThanks a lot for the feedback, your comment made us break up in tears, hearing the word "Masterpiece" is such a strong word that it made us feel like everything was worth it.
Thank you so much for taking the time of writing this comment and for playing our game!
(And no, it wasn't a Jojo reference haha)
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