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A jam submission

The WandererView game page

The Wanderer Beta
Submitted by Glouton, Lucus, gloutonbarjo — 18 hours, 19 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Style#713.8103.810
Originality#723.7863.786
Game Design#1482.9052.905
Adherence To Theme#2022.7382.738

Ranked from 42 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted

Although the "Pack" theme was a really secondary thing here, It has a really nice athmosphere and kept me interested all the way to the end of it. I can sense that the art was done in a hurry, which is perfectly understandable for a 48h game jam, but the sound effects are on point.

My only complaint is that sometimes the text disappears in the art. would be nice to isolate it with a text box e or a semi transparent background. 

Really solid game, congratulations!

Developer(+1)

Hehe, we will definitly make it easier to read, since it is... mainly a game to read :)  Yeah it could've been made more "packish", or at least we could have insisted a bit more. We had the idea to make the title on the very first slide something like "Pack&Go" with tissues sounds when clicking. 

Thank you for your feedback!

Submitted (1 edit)

Nice storytelling game and use of fine art. Some text were hard to read on the background image, perhaps you can add a black transparent layer underneath so it seperates more from the image?

Check out our game https://itch.io/jam/ndab-jam/rate/631915

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

I like the game, nice story based game, cute art and good story! Continuation would be nice

(Warning : I didnt have a great recording software on my mobile, the sound quality is bad, sorry for that)

Developer(+1)

Oh you've made a video out of it Oo Thank you, it is motivating to finish at least what we had in mind at the beginning of the jam !

Submitted

Yeaa! :)
Lucus had commented here ^^ https://itch.io/jam/ndab-jam/topic/780187/ill-play-rate-your-games-and-record-ga...
Ah yes its nice to finish a jam game idea!

Submitted(+1)

Great story and amazing art style! Only issue i had was reading the text at some parts of the game. Good job!

Love the drawings and the ambiance! :)

Submitted(+1)

A cool little story this is.

Interesting setting and character.

Here is my...

Summary:

Adherence to Theme 
  • You are on the road with some things in your pack. The Story could've incorporated packing things a little more but it gets by just fine.
Game Design 
  • it is a solid Visual Novel,made for mobile screens. That hurts us desktop cats a bit but it was playable very well on my screen, since the Ui was well designed.
Originality
  • Highly original idea. Excellent work!
Style
  • Some graphics seem to be unfinished, I guess you hit the same brick wall with time that I did with my art.
  • What's there is pretty stunning and visually interesting, some sounds effects where a bit loud but not obnoxious (though I guess it was for dramatic effect), this is  not counting the excellent Ambiance sounds used.
  • I liked that there are multiple pathways that branch off shortly but come back together quite well.

Overall:

I like this. It was interesting and enjoyable for what it did. Some more refined visuals and a continuation of the Story would be something I look forward to!

Developer

Hello, 

Thank you for your very complete feedback, it is really helpfull since we will keep improving some things here and there for a few weeks to have a more polished game :) +: we are very happy that people actually played and appreciate it :)

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