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Price of Friendship's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #54 | 2.846 | 2.846 |
| Adherence to Theme | #55 | 2.885 | 2.885 |
| Overall | #59 | 2.910 | 2.910 |
| Concepts & Originality | #61 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Ranked from 26 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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f around and Find out type of story
I really love the custom artwork. the voice of this story is very unique and works well with the point of view. I recognized some of the names from Tardom's desert adventure. I'm glad they will get their comeuppance.
Interesting narrative, which could have been improved by fleshing out some of the details as I felt they were sacrificed to get to the consequence element.
Your writing- quality and clearity- is good but I think you spent a few more words on physical descriptions than the story's idea needed. Would've loved to see more
Interesting take on the theme with a clear narrative. The ending was a bit expected but still impactful. Great job keeping the tension!
She will be happy to hear your comments, as she was trying to do a prequel to one of the previous Jam entries to link the stories directly. Greatly appreciate your time reading and commenting!