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Very nice story and best use of a "rounding error" ever! 😁

Very nicely crafted, and definitely nailed the theme! 

Nice idea, the thought of a Havoc brother being tortured is captivating. One thing that stood out was the how the characters seem to go from placid, in a verbal sparring match, to explosive anger and back again; this lost some of the tension building I think you were going for.

Lovely story about one of the most twisted elements of the dark elves. Great building and descriptions of the characters.

Really well paced, enjoyable yarn. Can really picture the scene this was set in, just from the conversation. Well done!

Nice read. Particularly enjoyed how the lead character was confused throughout!

I really loved the machine cult world you built and the sprinkle of humour with the captive. The action was paced brilliantly and drew me in! Very enjoyable read 👍

Thank you! I worked out the ending and worked backwards 😁

Thanks very much! When the theme was released I knew I wanted to do something with a paintbrush and death and it grew from there! 😂

Wow, that hooked me in and what a ride! You managed to get that sense of rising panic so well and the pay-off at the end 👏 Really awesome.

That was great! Really loved how you built the relationship between the two humans then the catharsis of the climax and nice touch with the epilogue. What more creative resources than a fountain pen 👍

A nicely written story that I really enjoyed. A bit of a slow start but once I got into it, the imagery was brilliant.

Thank you so much! It was great fun to get inside the head of an Orc!

Oh the subtle humour laced through this was the icing on the cake! Great story telling the interaction at the end was brilliant too. Great job.

Totally gripping from beginning to end.

Great job on this! I don't think the Wardens get enough love and there is so much scope to develop them, and you did just that! The imagery you portrayed was great.

Such good pacing throughout, I was totally engrossed. Great job.

This link works 👍

Hats off for the ambition of this piece and great concepts. Maybe trying to add a little too much in, but feel of the frantic panic was palpable. Well done.

Thanks, glad you enjoyed the orcs!

Glad you liked it! It always bugged me why orcs were green...

Absolutely superb. The basic premise was solid and then the little surprises thrown in kept the excitement up. Then the image of the castellan was beautiful and a great ending. Great stuff!

Thanks! The word constraint was tough on this one as I had more I wanted to put in but alas, I've left it to your imagination!

A great story, told from a unique angle whilst subtlety aligning to the theme superbly. Very well done!

Yup me too. Was waiting for someone else to open it first...

Really well written and paced. Kept me engaged right to the end...but what happened in the next fight?! 

Fantastically written, great job of conveying the emotions of the cast. Brilliant to see some Starhost stories. 

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it! There has always been something that bugged me about the GW Orcs so I wanted to take a different approach; glad it paid off! 

Thank you so much! Have been thinking about Orcs since the last Jam as I didn't read any stories with them as the main characters - glad it paid off 😁

Thanks, I was particularly chuffed with myself over that title! Agree totally that the ending was on the nose, but I thought it fit the general demeanour of the Boss...

Haha, thanks! Never heard of those books...maybe I'll check them out!

Wow. Really clear story telling and captivating throughout. Pancake! Great stuff, I'd love to read more!

Good narrative with a very nicely written ending. 

A slower start drew me in as the story built very well. I really enjoyed the imagery at the end and the detail of the astronomy book. Nice job!

Really nice, the ending was well set up throughout and the whole piece worked nicely - kinda felt bad for Arkan!

Loved the take on the lore and the writing of this story. Well done 👍 

Superb imagery and development of characters in such a short space. Really enjoyed reading this!

Absolutely compelling. Brilliant stuff!

Totally drew me into the world. Loved the whole build up and then to deliver that last line...👌

I was totally hooked from beginning to end! Great idea and execution.