Great moodboard. Would have liked it to be a little bit more obvious what the dutchies' things were and some fun lizard man dialogue. Overall, very fun!

Really enjoyed the use of terms from the POV of the main character, nicely executed

Your character voice was very strong in this story - you did a great job of giving us Okzuchuut's unique perspective without letting it confuse the reader or get in the way of the story you were telling. Well done!

I really enjoyed seeing the story through the gators eyes. It was fun deciphering what the fire bird was and the parrot men inside. I like your mood board photos they seem really fun.