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Fish indeed! Nice read and reeks of the need to be expanded upon in the future!
Thank you. I had a quite a bit more written up for this but had to leave it due to page length. Perhaps this will get a fuller treatment at some point!
Good job! I like how you stuck with the mesoamerican naming theme, and the detailed troop movements make the action very clear. I think a little more characterization could help to get the reader more invested and help the action shine even brighter.
Thank you! I had to leave a bunch of description and characterization on the cutting room floor. I agree with you entirely.
Very fun!
Thanks!
Well written and fun to read, but …. something is a bit fishy! :P
Ha! Thank you!