You managed the dark tone very well. Quite a bit of story woven into one page.
This was a fun read and very on theme. Well done!
Thanks! I wanted a real boots on the ground feeling.
Thank you!
Thank you! I want to flesh out the rest of the story.
Excellent work! You really captured the feel of the setting.
Well done. Rarely do we see the perspective of the conscripts. Red Star!
