Amazing!  Feels very gothic horror, reminds me of Frankenstein.

I very much like the focus! A very good tale of hubris. Very much feels almost like a dark fantasy novel premise, and that's a good thing! Definitely agree that it could've used a few more editing passes, and some of the sentence and paragraph structure could've been reworked, but honestly, the bones on this ship are sound!
 Keep writing, my friend!
And well done!

I’m a sucker for “more than you bargained for” type spooky tales so I greatly enjoyed this. As for constructive criticisms, it likely could have used a few more rounds of editing, but beyond that this story is awesome!

The POV is awesome. It really felt like I was watching some twisted documentary. The way with words completely brings this story to another level.