Play book
Partycrasher's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concept & Originality | #16 | 3.862 | 3.952 |
| Flow & Clarity | #21 | 3.582 | 3.667 |
| Overall | #21 | 3.489 | 3.571 |
| Adherence to the Theme | #26 | 3.024 | 3.095 |
Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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You have to look for the rockand hard place themes some. The flow was fast but good. Very good entry for a Die Hard action story. Enjoyed hearing the story of an inquisitor.
An adventurous and engaging piece filled with suspense, dynamic characters, and a setting that captivates the reader's imagination. It beautifully captures the theme, putting the protagonist squarely between a rock and a hard place multiple times.
A nice, light hearted adventure. The humorous atmosphere was most welcome.
The flow was troublesome. Splitting the words like that, made me frequently stop in order to comprehend what I just read.
In essence, it is a good story. I look forward to your future work.
Flow is definitely the part that I had the most trouble with. Would you believe a lot of it was a casualty to keep it on one page?
Good catch though. Shaking off the rust!
Ouch, the size requirement really hits you where it hurts. One way I get around it is by refraining from pressing "enter" twice. It eats up a lot of space in the long run.
You have the makings of an adventure series here for the thief-entrepreneur with his own Javert
Directed by Edgar Wright
That was really enjoyable! Very amusing story and a nice take on a roguish adventurer. Very well done.