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A Fronte Praecipitium, A Tergo Lupi's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concept & Originality | #17 | 3.766 | 4.053 |
| Flow & Clarity | #20 | 3.619 | 3.895 |
| Overall | #22 | 3.489 | 3.754 |
| Adherence to the Theme | #24 | 3.081 | 3.316 |
Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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A definitely harrowing tale, I liked the different points of view used in the story. The ending was also a good "drop-off" point.
I am excited for you to participate next jam.
A beautifully crafted fantasy tale. The blending of ancestral magic, political dynamics, and the very real threat faced by Kryssa made it a captivating read.
I was very impressed with this one - you crammed a lot of character and setting into a very short story without making it feel cramped. I think devoting so much space to Kryssa and Gril'gr at the start and giving their conversation room to breathe was a really strong choice; that, combined with the way you described the march, really added a lot of pathos.
This is really kind, and moving to read. Thank you so much.
I enjoyed the world building here, this could easily be expanded in both directions for a longer story!
Thanks!