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Deal Gone Wrong - An OPR Writing Jam #8 Submission's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #10 | 3.773 | 3.773 |
| Overall | #19 | 3.515 | 3.515 |
| Concept & Originality | #20 | 3.636 | 3.636 |
| Adherence to the Theme | #21 | 3.136 | 3.136 |
Ranked from 22 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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love the “mission gone sideways” scenario! Would love to see where this goes next!
That was a really nice story! I really like how easily you introduced the three primary characters and got their personalities across. Very fun read!
Would watch this as a short film. Nice.
And where do their adventures take them now? Tune in next week.... very nice, I liked this, thanks for sharing!
Clear, concise, and a strong sense of tension overall!