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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Quality | #195 | 2.205 | 2.357 |
| Creativity | #196 | 2.405 | 2.571 |
| Overall | #201 | 2.155 | 2.304 |
| Composition | #203 | 2.071 | 2.214 |
| Impression | #204 | 1.938 | 2.071 |
Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Difficulty
C (Super Challenge)
Make something that has elements that can be listened to both backwards and forwards.
Link(s) of the submission on streaming services
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vTJP0IKOPBM
Number of tracks2
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I liked the drum in the second track, but I though the glockenspield volume was too high. It would also benefit from more dynamic variation. I have sensible ears to high pitch and I had a bit of trouble to stay focus the whole time because of that.
I liked the mood you set in your first track when the string comes, it has some kind of weird uneasy feeling I enjoyed.
I thought the triangle was a very nice touch to the track! I think something you could do to make it sound even better is have the triangle pan left and right because it gets a little tiring in the left ear the whole time.
I enjoyed when the percussion came in during the second track and the chords were quite nice but I think the bells were out of key rather often making the song sound rather dissonant for a lot of it's duration. The issue was kind of exaggerated in the second half because the reversal of the notes caused it to not only sound out of key but also didn't flow very well from note to note.
I'm not really sure how to fix that flow issue but I think changing the notes the bells play to align more with the chords the song as a whole would improve drastically.
It says you've submitted two songs but the Youtube link you provided is only one track.
This is my first time submitting to a jam, so I'm still getting used to everything. If you go to my channel, you'll find the second song there.
A very engaging Idea. While the beginning was a bit weird sounding harmonicly, it evolved pretty well! I did somewhat get reminded of some old Tim Burton Movies. However I do believe that your chosen difficulty is wrongly chosen, since for dificulty C it needed to sound 1:1 forward and backwars (whitch a Piano for eg. can't do). Also, I seem to miss your second song, or is this a typo?
The difficulty is probably wrongly chosen. It’s my first jam so I’m still getting used to how it works. As for the stuff about the second song, could you explain what you mean? I’m afraid I don’t fully understand.
On your Submissoun page is an info of how many songs are submitted. This info will be given by you while filling up the submission formular. On there it states you have 2 songs. But it might be a typo. It happens to anybody. On my first submission I've inadvertently disable downloads for the first days and havn't posted additional Links. So it could be worse ^^.
But I do have 2 songs? Was I supposed to link the second one somewhere I didn’t?
That might be my fault. I've only watched you YouTube-link, there only seem to be one song. But you're right, on your uploads there are two songs. Guess I owe you an appoligy and also a furthor listening.
All good. As long as both songs have been uploaded then I’m happy.