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- The game plays very well in browser and the humor of it is absolutely amazing. The GDD is written well with good details which suite for a great base for the games development. The theme was met very well and taken into an unusual approach, which is super nice. The prototype is well made and features everything needed. One pointer I have about the game, since you are just a sword, you can't go anywhere so give the player first the feeling of helplessness during the beginning and just let someone random pick it up and give the player the chance to become more powerful as a sword while going along. Let the person throw away the sword at the tavern when they realize it can talk or something so the sword meets the man in the alley. Let the player go on adventure with the person at give em some tragedy as well. There is so much story in this concept. Looking forward to see more of this.
Link to your Game Design Doc on Google Drive.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KgH0zFpWUunhUSmdbY5yMuoMB1_loUugURP0l8aC9io/edit?usp=sharing
Have you checked that your GDD is publicly accessible ?
Yes
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Yes
Summarise your game!
Interview your possible suitors through several text options. By answering questions, heckling bystanders, and making “cutting” (sarcastic) remarks, learn more about the nobility of knighthood, or perhaps you’ll stoop lower to less noble causes, serving criminally. Play as a sword cast out from his maker in search of purpose in this short visual novel.
Please explain how your game fits the theme:
You are a sword. We took the theme of "You are the weapon" and said, "Why don't we make a dating sim where you are a sword?" And that's what we decided to do!
Is there anything you'd like the judges to pay particular attention to?
We hope that the comedy and jokes that we put in the game are of the general audience's liking. We are proud of the stupidity and believe that's what gave us such a fire for making this game.
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Comments
Aw this game is really cute, and the dialogue is very funny. I really appreciate the ability to speed up the text, it's so essential for dialogue-heavy games and many people don't think to include it. I would have played a bit longer but I couldn't not pick the kitty knight, he was so precious :3 Maybe next time save your best for last lol!
Thank you for your feedback! It seems that the knight is the fan favorite lol! Thank you for playing our game. It means the world to us!
I enjoyed the humor and the art! And the typing sound when talking was crunchy (in a good way). My only criticism is that the font chosen doesn't fit super well with the rest of the game.
Thanks for the feedback! It's the first game we ever made so we have much to learn. Will take that into account for future projects/updates of this game!
What a great first game!! Keep it up! :D
Thank you!!!
Love the humor. Its purrfect, I went with the knight.
Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for playing!
Cat knights are the best kights.
Without a doubt