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A jam submission

Longest NightView project page

A cold, miserable place for MÖRK BORG.
Submitted by m crowley (@Silvertree__) — 53 minutes, 7 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Overall#14.0004.000
Darkest (How deep into the darkness of man can you go?)#14.6674.667
Coldest (How far below zero can you get?)#24.5564.556
Most Deathless (You know it when you see it.)#43.3333.333
Most "Northern" (We're from Minnesota, it's okay.)#83.4443.444

Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Host

Very creepy characters and a very exciting final encounter with the Whispering Herald. Also, love the exposure rules. Very well done. I thoroughly enjoy the clever use of layout.

Developer(+1)

Thank y'all so much! Glad you like it.

Submitted

Love the exposure mechanic and a great colophon page. Great stuff! 

Developer(+1)

Thank you (and thank you for the word colophon, which I did not know)! 😁

Submitted

I love the layout of this piece, it's beautiful done. I envy how you designed the exposure rules – I tried but it became way to complex and I had to scrap it.

The description of everything from NPCs to sitting is brilliant. All in all job well done.

Developer

Thank you so much! The Exposure stuff was something I knew I wanted to include from the start, but was the last thing I wrote. I was starved for space when I finally hashed them out—turned out to be a good thing because it forced me to simplify.

Submitted

The layout of this adventure is excellent. I like the Exposure rules and the clean and colorful descriptions of each location. The herald is very well fleshed out a makes a strong opponent!

Developer

Ah, thank you! I'm very proud of the Herald!

Submitted

This is a beautiful submission and the monster and antagonists are sinister. I think this scenario could be strengthened by an obvious goal to achieve and inclusion of allied NPCs (who might serve the purpose of goal) that are under threat of the herald and it's cult.

Developer

Thank you for the kind words, and especially for the advice! I thought of the village as a kind of trap you could stumble into as the weather was getting bad ("You need to find shelter soon, or you're done, but this lady won't let you in. What do you do?"), but I agree it would be a stronger scenario with more concrete reasons to be there. I also wanted to flesh out the NPCs a bit more, but... I ran out of space.  😅

Submitted

Space constraints are definitely a challenge. The village definitely has the vibe of a trap, and the weather creates the urgency to make rash decisions. That's kind of brilliant in its own right.