Play Story
Playing With Fire - Part I's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Audio | #6 | 3.305 | 4.143 |
How much do you enjoy the game overall? | #20 | 2.507 | 3.143 |
How well does the game fit the themes? | #21 | 2.849 | 3.571 |
Did you make it in 3 hours (put 5 by default) | #23 | 3.989 | 5.000 |
Overall | #24 | 2.621 | 3.286 |
Visuals | #29 | 1.709 | 2.143 |
Gameplay | #31 | 1.368 | 1.714 |
Ranked from 7 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Nice music, wish it changed a little when something big happened
Did you write this story yourself? There's a few typos (which can be distracting) such as "scared" which should be "scarred"
Also, I would personally prefer to see which page I'm on and how many pages there are in total somewhere on the screen
Yes, I wrote it. I did the actual writing as part of the 3h and english is not my first language, so I missed a lot of typos the spell check didn't catch.
That's also why everything else is very bare-bones as well. Maybe if I try this again I'll do the story off the clock and spice up the visual/audio experience.
Thanks for the feedback :)
good to see someone take the theme connotatively
Thanks :)
Music here creates such a nice mood for a story =)
Thanks!