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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Sound | #11 | 3.917 | 3.917 |
| Theme Incorporation | #13 | 3.917 | 3.917 |
| Visuals | #14 | 3.333 | 3.333 |
| Narrative | #15 | 3.417 | 3.417 |
| Overall | #15 | 3.750 | 3.750 |
Ranked from 12 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Trapped with Someone & Forbidden Romance
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Definitely a refreshingly light yet flavored play. I felt like the scenario set up a strong context to get to know this character in, and because of that I really got to hone in my attention!
the mc's internal dialogue really had me chuckling all the way through ^^ such a cute and fun read with lots of great moments!!
Yay! I hoped the internal dialogue would amuse someone other than myself :)
This was really cute. The dialogue felt realistic and the MC made me laugh
I'm happy to hear the dialogue felt realistic! That's my biggest focus after the plot making sense because nothing takes me out of a story faster than dialogue that nobody would ever say.
It’s such a joy watching your stretch your wings with VN development. This game gave me all the warm fuzzies! I’m sure Bianca will forgive us…hopefully :x LMAO
Thank you! I am so glad I decided to participate in that first Velox jam- having to actually release something rather than postponing repeatedly while I try to 'perfect' it was really good for me.
And I'm so happy you got the warm fuzzies! I do think Bianca will forgive us too ;)
Glad to see you back with another Velox entry! This one was really cute and sweet!
Thank you!! It means a lot to me to hear that 😊
Sweet short story! I liked the switches between different types of layouts (the phone etc), made it immersive! Bas' facial expressions were great too :3
Thank you! I'm quite pleased with learning the different mode options- switching from novel mode, phone, and the regular text box. And now that I've learned how to use layered images I shall never have a static sprite again! Mwahahahah!