Thank you for your input! I will have to agree that there isn't a lot of impact in the story. If I had more time, I would have liked to flesh out the characters. Looking back on it, there's not enough scenes of the wolf being mean/antisocial towards the main character for his growth to feel natural or earned. That is one thing I want to change once I have the opportunity. To be honest, this too is my biggest issue with the story. I didn't have enough time to plan and my writing was quite aimless at some points.
I will admit I did get carried away having the characters talk about their interests more than themselves, and that is something else I would like to work on. Hobbies are OK, but they're not typically indicative of a person or their life. I will keep this in mind when I have a chance to revise the script.
The story has potential to me, and while it is a "finished product", I don't truly consider it finished. When I finish anything I create, I have to have a feeling of "this is a job well done," but I don't feel it with this VN. It's passable but it does not meet the standard I hold myself to.