I love the Idea, would instantly buy a full game like this, but to also say something constructive. There should be a short tutorial or a rating system depending on your performance. I wasn't sure if I played the game right for half my playtime.
Yeah, quite a few features that Papers Please had would make it better, like citations and cross-referencing. Being able to actually compare things instead of having to memorize and go between them. Also maybe more NSFW, if this is intended to be an NSFW game. Pretty nice for like a game made in a week though.
Honestly I feel like the citation system, as well as a progressing time scale would probably be better than a big tutorial that potentially tries to show you everything at once. Maybe the manual could be there to tell you what to look for.