I like it when writers manage to set their ambiance well !
There's a lot of potential with your writing, the characters feel alive and the discussions are well-written. But the story would benefit by being more tight and structured. If you want your readers to be hooked, a few stakes could amplify your story and we never like characters as much as when we feel for them and see them struggle and fight.
I know it's a slice of life, but events and high and down would help your story by adding beats to it.
I liked it still, you have something with the way you're writing characters.